WHAT. DID. HE. SEE? In details, please...

Out of 10, I'd give you 11.5. This is HELLA GOOD. Old fic though, right?

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This was so funny, and I loved your characterizations of James and Sirius! The ending was hilarious too.

That was mean. Of Sirius, of course. But then, I think he learnt his lesson, haha. Extremely interesting. Slightly American though...

Funny!

That was rather mean... but also pretty funny:P the ending dialogue was great._

ahahaha that was great :)

Wait, what did he see? I'm sorry, I'm clueless...

The sarcasm, the humor, it was all great, but all was overshadoved by the brilliant characterisation of both James and Sirius! I especialy liked that you made James more sensible... he had to grow up eventually... Favoriting.

Oh. My. God.

You truly have an imaginative mind - I mean, this story is so creative and hilarious.

But I'm kinda in shock right now. LOL.

Well, I have to say you got Sirius spot on, and James too, despite the fact that he was growing up.

Great job!

Wordy

LOL. THATS WAT SIRIUS GETS!

Eurgh...Sirius needs to draw a line.

Brilliant! You characterize James and Sirius perfectly. I love James's growing maturity in comparison to Sirius who never really grew up.

BAHAHAHA

What did they really expect to happen? Jeeze, that was hilarious. I wonder why Sirius was so into it, though... I think I'm going to read some of your other stuff, later.

OMFG! This is a delight from the charming love poems to the excellent characterizations, the perfect prank and the flawless execution. As I said on another website, I see the Marauders as Fred and George times 4 on steriods. You really have captured them in their last year perfectly with Sirius' stubbornly clinging to boyhood and James' burgeoning maturity. And as an officer of the HMS Wolfstar, I must profusely thank you for the reference to Padfoot and Moony studing on top of the astronomy tower!

As a matter of fact, I'll recommend this in the Moony and Padfoot Parlour forum for a start ...

The Twilight Zone theme is completely lost on me, but this is still really well done. The poetry and Marauder shenanigans made me giggle (possibly a little too loudly), but it was also nice to see the subtle touch of humanity that proved James really did change. P

*favourites*