Bwa-ha-ha-ha-ha!

(grins) MORE! MORE!

Ok, what can I say here? Another masterpiece! It's looking quite good now! You might say it's an epilogue gone out of hand, but it's shaping up very nicely! Poor Grey... if things continue going this way, he's going to end up not only as Akane's fiancee, but her husband! Aaaah... just out of curiosity. What are Pokemon doing in China? Congratulations for another excellent story! Keep 'em coming!

You know, the irony of this will be if this life turns out much better than when Grey was sent to that one planet where he was eaten alive.

Now the question remains, if Kasumi and Nabiki eneter his apartment, and see the Ami doll (Who happens to look like a short-haired Akane), what will happen?

Very funny, as usual. I'd actually half expected Grey to get shoved back into the timeline in which he *was* Akane, but this works too. From the sound of things, Genma fell into the Pool of Drowned Ass (or mule or donkey - hard to tell with just the sound to go by). Ranma's fate has been left in suspence, so we don't know if he's still going to be cursed to turn into a girl, or if someting else wil happen. Personally, I'm hoping that he turns into a little fox and ends up engaged to either Kasumi or Nabiki, but that's just me... _

Bah, old works no fun, at least write one more chapter so we can see what happens in poor Grey's apartment.

Y'know, I really enjoy these series of stories - mostly funny, but with a bit of agnst that adds a smattering of emotional intensity. Wheee! Minor grammar point - you repeatadly use a comma when you should be using a period, semicolon, or conjunction. For example, "There is no recipie for chaos, she brings her own ingredients." should be either "...for chaos. She brings her own..." or "...for chaos; she brings her own..." or "...for chaos, as she brings her own..." (Chicago manual of style, 5.30)

An excellently understated start to a new series. Now if only the gods can manage to keep people from butting in on this new mission :) Grey may not suffer half as much. Although, with him supposedly dating Akane, this is debatable; I suppose it depends on what he is and is not willing to put up with and how others react to his reactions. I don't think others would react too well to a six foot tall foreigner hitting the most "popular" girl at school.

...To think, I sent an email to you this morning commenting on how nice it would be to have more gray fics... Either the kami favor me, or you truly do have that psychometry(sp?) ability.

All I can say is.. "WAI!" More more m o re more more more!

heh... I don't remember where you first brought in the joke of having gray as a grandmaster of Martial arts baseball, I think it was in Rune with a View 1 SI... but it doesn't matter... It is damn cool seeing it brought out...

So in classic raving fanfic fan mode...

"Wai, Lord gray, write more!"

Hey! A tentative sequel to the Labor series. _ Nice. Haven't really read that many fanfics with sports-related themes. It'd be interesting to see more of that incorporated. Also liked how your creating tension between Grey and Akane. Not too much violence, a little dash of forced romance, lots of comedy. Are you taking any suggestions in how to deal with the mission? You could model it a bit with what happened in Legend pf Black Heaven. Oji Tanaka tricked into participating in a war. He agreed to continue working for one side because of his developing feelings towards his contact, Layla/Yuki. However, he's still married, to Yoshiko Tanaka, and has a kid. Akane could be like his wife, since it's his mission to be with her. *shrug* The rest of the baseball team could be the members of the heavy metal band Oji used to be in. Eh, it's just a suggestion.