great story

Ha! Not bad, not bad, I like the fact that the original sailors are back and they are proving to next to useless. O_O

Poor Ami is getting hit with the worst of it, but she is having to perform in front of her mother and that is never easy.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

Nice development. Thanks for the chapter and please keep them coming. _

Ahh, another chapter of this great piece of work.

Just what I need on a sunday night. Though I'm beginning to feel another heartbreak coming up for Greylle(which I don't really like, felt that the poor bugger suffered enough), I still really like this story and the rest of your works.

Keep up the good work and may the writer's block never hit you.

Yes, i do read these reviews. When i go up to post stories in fact. My system has gotten unstable in its old age (6 years?) and all these pop-ups cause system lockup.

Not only do i read the reviews, but i act upon them. There was an attempt to do a happy SI style, and based on the reviews of that i've deleted all my own copies of it - incl the one here. The omake are experiments, and some experiments by their very nature fail.

Retake is being written "on the fly" and as an experiment itself similar to the omake in some regards. Based on feedback, i drop some elements (sort of like some anime (Dr Tofu) where elements are dropped based on viewer/fan response).

(bows to readers) thank you for your feedback, and for those who voted for A Bunnier Alternative on the Ranma Fanfiction Awards - thank you for your vote. (Now if only part 2 would show, i only sent it a month ago though so it may still appear on the RAAC.)-gregg

Were are Haruka and Michuri? I cann't wait till the next chapter, I have a feeling that it will be very interesting.

Well well more Retake, yes it's great I really love your work metro, it's so much fun, and I really like the retake it insane, just the way I like it.

HMS White Star

I've got several things to say, so let's begin...

1)The use of Abbott and Costello's classic 'who's on First" routine was great.

2)keep the chapters coming (any chapters, I find all your stories to be entertaining)

3) I add another vote for an expansion/continuation of the Tigar omake 8) As for originality, it's difficult to find a concept that hasn't been done before, but that doesn't mean you can't do a better job of it.

4) To Keds999 (who commented below), Ranma's not the star of this fic, Graelle is. Ranma doesn't even arrive at the Tendo's place until the fifth chapter. And he's not all that distorted anyways.

Apparently I've been forgetting to drop by and review here _;;

bad me.

Well, this is truly getting kaotic. I personally am starting to wonder why you are adding certain bits as storywise they are hard to touch at all to the main greyelle story. Where'd Morgan go this chapter _;?

I do hope next chapter focuses on some sort of bring together with the foundering romance ties between Greyelle and Hotaru (as well as the others _)

No more tigar flicks? She's truly a lovable character as I've said many a time to ya.

Keep it goin'

Fearless Leader

Keep Tigar! I love this thing, it mutates like nobody's business!

By the by, since Marvel DID do Manga of their comics fopr a while, be sure to include Marvel and DC heroes for Anime Land, as 1) SOME reality must've done it, and 2) Marionette Yvonne would be able to have the better ones double for all that security!

I'm sick, I admit it *bow*

P.S.: if you're really wild, try to really write "Eye of the Tigar"! This thing has serious warpage potential, and won't even hurt poor Greylle any!

Hello!

Okay, what to say? I like this fic...for the most part. It's interesting, it's somewhat different, and its got lots of crossovers. But its got some problems...

1) Leave the politics out of the story. The whole thing you have going on in the United States is pretty sad. I don't think that the American people are such sheep that their whole lives revolve around what politicians tell them. If something like what you said were to happen, new elections would be held quickly and things would run on (with a large number of Americans laughing loudly at the situation). Americans are pretty good at raising to the challenge when something major happens.

2) Like most appearent self-insert this story has come down to 'Major character shows up and takes control of the world', though in this case its seems mostly accidental. He seems to truly not care about this world, it characters, and the affects he is having on other peoples lives.

I have a couple questions as well...

1) Do you, Metroanime, actually read these Reviews? We have no e-mail address for you, and this is our only way of letting you know what we think. Perhaps at the end of your next chapter, you could mention the fact that you do read these?

2) Continue the Tiger omake! Show me a fic with that sort of premise (that is continued past one chapter and is not a majorly confusing fic (in regards to relationships) like ToTW and such), and then I will agree that she and it are not original. Otherwise, it seems new to me!

3) Continue with Ranma/SM/OMG omake! Even if for only a couple more chapters!

4) Continue the Pokegirls story! Don't let other authors limit your writing!

Anyways, that my two cents...for now! Keep Writing!

great story

ALRIGHT! A NEW CHATPER...it's been awhile and well worth the wait, it's great to hear from you again too. _ The Omake at the end was pretty different too.

Heh

Can't wait to see what you do next. _

Woohoo! More Retake!

I've been reading your fics almost obsessively lately, a task made slightly more difficult by the fact that your webpage and address no longer exist, and that recently the much-lamented site by Celeste Byrd, Studio Aesir, finally expired.

Anyways, without a working e-mail adress, this is pretty much the only way I can send you the praise you so richly deserve. Great going, man. Keep it up as long as you're having fun.

To follow up on the last review...at least your Omakes are better than this fic. You should try to expand on those. Especially the Tyger omake, as well as the SM/Ranma/OMG Omake!

Believe me. I like reading most of your fics, but this one. As one reviewer already stated that it's too much a headache just reading it.