I laughed at some funny parts.

AAIIEE! Where be Neon? Hey, what if they were to lead E.F. to the crazy beaver lady's house? THAT WOULD BE FUNNEH!

Oh man, they're so close to bring the nice Flippy back.

Oh no! This is bad for Francis.

Le gasp! Damn it Francis, snap out of it!

Hope your writer's block clears soon, although here's an idea if it's any help: maybe Flaky could intervene here. Just an idea though...

I love Flippy's demon stories! Probly because Flippy's mah favorite character! *dances* yay

Please don't kill off Neon or Francis!

Uh oh, now that the demon side of Flippy took control, Flaky and the others are in big trouble.

OMG! Francis, you evil...!

This story is going great. I luves it so much!

Please update it soon! :D

Uh oh, Francis made a very big mistake.

Im not really a FlakyxFlippy fan but this story was awsome! :D i cant wait to see what happens next w

XD Did I mention that i am completely in love with your story? CUZ I AM. You're really good at keeping together a solid story while leaving hints and bits and pieces everywhere.

I wonder where this will go...

So the animal with topaz fur is a fox too? I half expected him to get in between Flippy and Flaky or something.

Huh. Wow. I was thinking, unsuccessful BF/GF relationship, Mr. Topaz is a stalker, but I guess this works out too.

Oh my goodness! I'm now shocked.

omg first i seriously thought that Francis was Neon's exor something, but no it's her oler brother. oh gez, hope you continue!

Oh, the mystery topaz-furred animal...what would really be ironic at this point is if Flippy flipped out. Heh, that would be funny...sorry, I'm just ruining your storyline here.