NO! Stopping the tale THERE?! You are EVIL! The romance of these two needs to be told in its entirety, not simply left off when convenient! No matter how long it takes you, no matter how many months go by between updates, you simply must open this back up and continue the march!

God what a beautiful story!

Sexy! Fazia is going to take her place in the very short list of literature's most alluring and deadly women, this I predict! Damn those meddling guards...

Nicely done! And rather brave of Nasir to take her on with no witnesses. The two of them make an ideal pair, and you've done an amazing job of heightening the tension between the two.

DAMN! That was the greatest verbal spanking I have ever read. Fazia is feisty and tough and that makes her unbearably sexy. Nasir will have his hands full, I should think.

Ha HA! A woman! Oh, what a terrifically brave and intriguing little lass! And more than a bit proficient with the blade, too! I love what you're doing here!

Brilliant! And you've held all the characters perfectly in keeping with the way they appeared in the film. Not an easy thing to do by any means. I look forward to reading more.