That was... er... I have no idea. It was well written. And I can't help but like it, even if it did make me feel sick at one point. ... hehe.

Good story...anyway... who is Xia of Dexia whatever you call him? please answer.

Katara' Apprentice.

ok i have to addmite ti was good but so fucking strang i couldnt tell if what happend was a dream or true. did aang cheat or what?

wow. that was, interesting. cute at the end :)

Thank god it was all a dream. Gruesome. No wonder you gave a warning. You see for me verbally threats are just better.

Hm. Very detailed. A few minor spelling errors but overall gruesome and painful. Being as how I want to leave my mark so everyone can see.

I re-issue my challenge via review instead of the PM I had sent you earlier in January. Your torture fic against one of my own. The details to my game are located on my profile.

Do answer back quickly. I am in need of a good challenge, petite.

oh...creepy. I kinda got the impression that the girl Aang was "cheating" on Katara with was Toph (ya know small, raven-haired). The description fits. This is creepy to say but you are VERY good at writing torture fics. Awesome job!

majorly creepy who is dexia

O_O

Oh...Darkness...

You still had it end happily, that was nice...or was it?

O_O

Anyway, that was very good. It made me shiver and jump. I don't do that very often when I read fanfiction. It was very elaborative and detail specific and I enjoyed that. Everyone needs a good horror fic every now and again, I always say! :P

Here's something! A friend of mine told me to go watch this one anime (you might already know it)...but left out the detail that it's horror. Yeah, threw me for a loop. It's called Higurashi No Naku Koro Ni. If you don't know what's it about, in short, the focus is on a few kids who live in a village and they all end up dying over and over again around the the same period...in different ways each...five episodes or so. If you do know what it is...skip my explanation, and you know what I mean. XD

The best torture one, I think, is episode 21. It's supposed to be inspiring, but mostly it just made me blink a lot. Anywho's, thanks for the great horror fic! ;)

I love torture fics and I definitely loved this one. The raw emotion, the pain, the reality of it just made my day. The ending with Aang was the best part! All in all, terrific job!_

that was really good, really good imagery, really well written

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nice job!

As I was reading this, I kept wondering if Katara was going to end up being put on display, floating in a glass jar of her very own. :)

Some nice work here, I particularly enjoyed the addition of a little mental torture to the mix. Although I wasn't too sure about the twist at the end, I did appreciate Aang's final comment. :D

very good 5/5