 emogirlS2 2009-07-10 . chapter 2Yay! Awesome story! Must go and continue reading! I totally get what you mean about the hits and no reviews. Reviews make you feel special! On to the next chapter! |
 Heavenly Divine 2009-05-20 . chapter 2I think this is great. Im totally looking forward to future chapters and quite seriously..Im scared of your pirate..lol.
You are a creative writer. I love it. |
 warnesy-01 2009-03-19 . chapter 18Excellent story! I loved seeing the story from the different perspectives and I can't wait until you start Alice's POV! Your a great writer, so keep going with your stories. |
 Bloodsucker101 2009-02-06 . chapter 8 Your story has taken an interesting turn. I really like the way you portray Edward's point of view. However, it seems as though some of your annotations are longer than the chapters themselves. I'm waiting to see what happens next. |
 xoxoxtwilightxoxox 2009-01-04 . chapter 17I like this story alot. Its very good. Sometime you rush it a little but thats okay. You can work on that. PLease Please Update this story! it deserves a sequel and you can't just leave us hanging like that. It is really good and please find the time to update. It doesnt have to be everyday but like...once a week...
Love Your Story and Hoping For a sequel!
Love,
xoxoxtwilightxoxox |
 xoxoxtwilightxoxox 2009-01-04 . chapter 16ITS OKAY JACOB! SHE STILL LOVES YOU! ITS OKAY! ITS JUST YOU AND YOUR PACK HAD TO DECLARE WAR! NOW THAT WAS A STUPID IDEA! BUT SHE STILL LOVES YOU! I STILL LOVE YOU! ITS OKAY! =( |
 xoxoxtwilightxoxox 2009-01-04 . chapter 7Poor Jacob. I love Him! But I Love edward More! I Hope He Doesnt Die. Does He!?! Please No!
Love it and I hope Jacob doesnt die! =( |
 xoxoxtwilightxoxox 2009-01-04 . chapter 6=( Poor Charlie...Amd Renee...Billy Black will know what really hapenned. I hope he doesn't tell Charlie.
Love It! Good Job! |
 xoxoxtwilightxoxox 2009-01-04 . chapter 5NOO! EDWARD YOUR A FUCKING IDIOT!HOW COULD YOU DO THAT!...
Now that Im Done yelling...aww jeez...this just keeps getting better and better! |
 xoxoxtwilightxoxox 2009-01-04 . chapter 4Edwards Back! Something doesn't feel right. Not with Edward and Bella but with Jacob... |
 xoxoxtwilightxoxox 2009-01-04 . chapter 2Aw... What the hell he promised he would stay! Jeezz Edward. He's just hurting her more by leaving. So typical edward.
Love Your Story So Far
=) |
 xoxoxtwilightxoxox 2009-01-04 . chapter 1Mr edward Cullen! Bad! Stupid Edward...get some control boy!
Love it! |
 xoxoxtwilightxoxox 2008-12-03 . chapter 3OMG! A PIRATE! OMG! THAT IS SO COL! LoL. Oh my, this story is good so far!Poor Edward, he must feel horrible. Oh well...On to reading chapter 4 |
 icefang7 2008-08-22 . chapter 17sorry for all u went through, i am soo glad u are safe. miss the story,but, would rather u do well in school...your choice on sequel, good luck, and thanks |
 barbiedoll123 2008-08-22 . chapter 17i hope you will update soon |