Beautiful. Slightly bitter-sweet, but perfectly done.
Simple, elagent, informative, sweet, and sad. Absolutely beautiful.

I have to marvel how someone can tell such a wonderful story with so little words. You're amazing.
You'll be a great poet one day, I'm sure of it.

*sigh* I love bitter-sweet stories, though at the last lines I couldn't help but hope that he had died of old age. ('litte girl' gave it away as a young death.) I'm a sucker for 'happily ever afters' that loves the bitter-sweet tales.

~The Critic, Zoa

PS: I'm sorry that it took me so long to get to this. It's been sitting in my inbox for about a week.

simply amazing! :D

aw the ending was so sad!

Lovely story. Your writing is such a wonderful read^^!

That was beautiful.

Simply amazing. AS ALWAYS YOU CRACKHO.

KIDDING. Love you.

:D

Good drabble Kira! Although even the happy ones have a sort of sad ending!

This was amazing.
After the second time of reading it, I cried.
Hun, I love you so much.
Your writing is so amazing it brought me to tears and yet I'm smiling and giggling.
Thank you, I love you.