i love how you wrote this story, i can't believe seto forgot mokuba's birthday, thats just sad TT^TT
but the ending was just adorable XD
i'm glad mokie's happy

It was great! I liked it;It was totally adorable, but not over-loaded with senseless fluff (Though it is fun at times XD) I liked how they both had different sides;I could see both POVs. I enjoyed it a lot! Sometimes it's nice do do shorter things. Great job;An excellent one-shot.

that was great!

Aw that was soo sweet of Seto!

Great one-shot. I liked it. Please update on your other stories 'Mokuba Runs' and 'Double Identity' please. I really liked them both. They were interesting.

That was very sweet. I'm on Mokuba's side. I would have never told Seto about the broken locket that's like a death wish.

Keep up the good work!
Love, Roxtrox7