Quite good, but very shory

very good

I liked the second half of the fic. It explained the dark side effect to the regaining of conciousness. But the first half-I didn't expect Chiba to be horny. Even if she were to open up, she wouldn't change her composure.

She's totally into fatties ;)

So am I.

Haha! Thanks for this! I just finished Paprika a few days ago...

Chiba being that horny was funny... poor Tokita... Happy marriage, huh?

Konakawa was so hott... but I kinda hated him! :o But I found him to be so hott!

I like the butler part, and the departure scene, it is well written. I know you warned us about the perv-ness, but the horny At-chan turns me off, totally.

Wow that was really great! Poor Paprika having to dissapear. awesome job.

Nice fic.

...What? lolz, the movie was weird enough...but a sexually charges At-chan? Dear Gods.

Awesome! I loved the movie, and frankly, I;m surprised this is the only story for this. It was pretty well writen, so I'm happy. Keep up the good storys!