Wow, your story sure is interesting! I really really like it! Guilmon and Charizard's conversation was funny and poor Pikachu. Now he has to deal with Maple as well. I guess trainer and pokemon are alike. :D
I noticed you make these mistakes, so I wanted to point out: scents - since; agents - against; pleas - please; els - else.
I hope you will update soon. :)

Nice chapter.

good stuff man...keep up with the saga so we can get back to the 01/02 crew. & i hope u liked the ch. i put up. the next 1 will be much better.

A nice update and I'm with Henry about Patamon and Gatomon, I mean come on, is so damn obvious they love each other, why they can't take that step and confess each other their feelings?

Really those two are a case o.o

Anyhow, things are really good here, I like how you know how to handle the characters ^^

short...but not bad at all. i can relate with u being in a slump & all. keep up the updating!

Short enough to have nothing to review on, but long enough to get me psyched about the upcoming saga.

Not bad. But your grammar is a bit off.

Spelling problems are creeping up again.

wow the strongest of the dds' digimon losing to a mere glaceon...that's hard to believe but then again so was what i did in my stuff. neways, nice job including the almighty ho-oh.

Very simple battle. You need to have back and forth action, neither side better until the end.

Jeez, Ash needs to share his secret on getting girls with me. How does he do it?

ouch with the part with t.k. but it's nice to see ash kicking some serious a$$ on the bad guys. keep it up.

Forgot to review chapter 18 but I did read it, I laughed with Gatomon kissing Pikachu thinking he was Patamon lol

Buneary sure freaked out, natural thing since she loves Pikachu ^^

Now onto chapter 19 I hope TK lives, he can't live his son or daughter without father o.o

I don't know how to say about Ash.

But it was a good chapter.

very good chapter. i love the initial pokemon/digimon interaction. & oh...a cliffhanger eh? can't wait for the next chapter. & thanks for the shout out. ur main OC will definitely make an appearance in my next chapter.

Finally, integration is coming!

I've been saying this from review #1:USE SPELL CHECK!!