Good chapter, but it felt too short for the time we had to wait for it!

awesome story, (though very short)i can't wait to see what happens.

Wow, this is a pretty awesome story so far. I hope you update soon. I really want to find out what happens next.

Nice chapter, but it was a little too short. And yea...I imagine being torn apart by Ridley wouldn't be any fun for Weavel. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Very nice story. I dunno what would be worse for Samus though: facing her fate with the Federation or running like she is now. Keep up the good work!

This story is awesome. I like how you include some native characters and some original ones, as well as the way you capture the characters personality, Samus in particular.

Make samus use her metroid dna or something and the phazon corruption (and make her win. yeah.)

keep going, its good.

It's almost the same chapter, except the end. I read your first story, and I hope this one's better.

Wow i love the story, like how you can make samus seem some what cold compared to other ppl( who make her sappy and angsty >.

Much better then the previous version. You've streamlined the story and improved the flow. Glad to see you're still working on this (I _hate_ seeing stories with potential going unfinished).

This story is very well written, nice job! One thing that you could do better would be to make perspective changes a bit clearer...it's kind of confusing when there's no marker.
Keep it up!

Cool, this version makes more sense then the other. Easier to follow along. Can't wait till the next chapter!

~Queenie