 marislily 2009-07-31 . chapter 1Liked it! good job. |
 Hieiko 2009-06-27 . chapter 1Good one. |
 darkknightwing 2009-04-17 . chapter 1well this was a different approach at Gordon finding out for sure who Batman is. no startling revelations, no panic, no actual evidence...love it! |
 Acara Otanbi 2009-04-08 . chapter 1Tom Elliot! WOTT! Go Hush! Hush is probably my most favorite Batman villians ever! He sure knows how to mess with people's minds!
By the way, Bruce should've totally knocked Cobblepot's block off! That would've been so funny to visualize!
Anyways, awesome job! |
 Alianne Potter-Black 2009-03-04 . chapter 1i really like the way you chose your words. that last sentence just solidified the story for me. good job. |
 Taio Kaiona 2009-01-07 . chapter 1Damn, that was good. Good work =] |
 IcyWaters 2009-01-06 . chapter 1I can't even begin to express how much I enjoyed this. :-) The conversation between Jim Gordon and Bruce Wayne is brilliantly written. I really like how they began casually discussing the recent events and the cleanup, and gradually get to the subject of Batman. The progression felt very real and natural, as though I was eavesdropping on them.
I absolutely love how they revealed so much without ever directly stating what they knew. It was fun watching Jim explain how he put the pieces together. I began wondering if he had most of it figured out prior to the party, or if things really began to click as he spoke to Bruce. That air of mystery really adds to the fun.
I checked out your profile and it appears this is your only Batman fic. I do hope you will write more! :-) |
 PrincessSkywalkerOrgana 2008-12-24 . chapter 1Aww. Perfect. |
 kingdomhearts222 2008-11-23 . chapter 1Another Jim Gordan would be awesome. But that's why Babs Jr. exists! |
 killing u with umbrellas 2008-10-24 . chapter 1i liked it. |
 Animekitty47 2008-10-18 . chapter 1That was very good. You're not the only one who wanted more Gordon in that movie. Well, this was a well-written lil fanfic. *gives you a cookie* |
 Kate Andromeda 2008-10-13 . chapter 1:) Such a good story. It made me smiling all over. Thanks for writing it. |
 Housewoodblues 2008-09-02 . chapter 1Exellent job. I think the same as Harrison Bergeron :"Gary Oldman did such a fantastic job with Jim Gordon. And you did an amazing job with this story. I like the location you chose for these two to have this conversation. There aren't enough Gordon stories out there, so I'm glad you wrote this one. I enjoyed the dialogue and you letting Gordon voice out his thoughts."
And I like the friendship between the 2. |
 Harm Marie 2008-08-22 . chapter 1This was great. I love what you did with the Wayne/Gordon dynamic. |
 Miss Stinky and Janey Poo 2008-08-07 . chapter 1Ooh, I loved this! I love the whole friendship between Gordon and Batman... You kept them very much in-character. I can very much see this happening. Awesome-possum job :)
~*Miss Stinky*~ |