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| ItalicsInIndigo 2008-08-14 ch 2, | abuseI really like this! Your words.. they melt off the screen like bittersweet chocolate. Please excuse me while I swoon. *thud* More soon, please? |
| Nikki-4 2008-08-11 ch 2, | abuseYour story is very good. I hope you post more. I can't wait to find out what happens. Have a fantastic week. =) |
| dark cherry 2008-08-05 ch 2, anon. | abusethnks for the 2nd chapter ^^ i think you should use empress instead of queen i think it sounds better but it´s just my opinion ^^ keep writing! ^^ |
| neko-chan 2008-07-31 ch 2, anon. | abusebeautiful story! update soon,please. |
| Sissi 2008-07-31 ch 2, | abuseGreat chapter! I loved it! Poor Keiki, though, especially near the end of the chapter, when he hears the conversation. Youko can be so clueless sometimes. I can't wait for more. I think you've captured the atmosphere of the story pretty well. It was just perfect. ;) |
| Sissi 2008-07-29 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. Your descriptions were wonderful! I can't wait to read more. |
| megumisakura 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseawsome story! update soon,plese! |
| alexandradorina 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abusei loved it... i'm adding you to story alert hope to read more from it soon bye |
| dark_cherry 2008-07-20 ch 1, anon. | abusecontinue please there aren´t many 12 kingdoms´fics and this one´s very good |
| 12k 2008-07-20 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is beautifully written. you have some wonderful poetic descriptions in there. really shed some light into a kirin's psyche. i especially liked keiki's thoughts on You-ou and it did add to the series. well done. |
| yankumi 2008-07-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG! That was awesome! There is serious lack of 12K awesome-ness in particular KeikixYouko awesome ness!! please please keep writing that was great. I have watched this serious a thousand times over and even have the 1st novel. So far your characters seem true, keep writing! |