I really enjoyed reading this. Rachel isn't nearly as in denial as in the regular books, and really, Ivy is who she belongs with. I was surprised how assertive Ivy was about this though, that seemed a little OC to me, but I would still love another chapter.

Wonderful!

In my perfect world this is exactly how the series will end. If it doesn't, I will always have this story to come back to in order to console myself.

Thank you!

great story! i really like that " the beginning" part at the end.

First of all, the way you started off with one of the largest inconsistencies in the books, how nobody really never mentioned that Kisten actually killed all those people and it was mostly brushed off. That was great.

Then the whole Ivy/Rachel thing. It was quite convincing how Rachel finally relented. And as always, highly pleasurable to read.

If I HAD to point out some weaknesses in the story it would be perhaps how Ivy's behaviour changed from trying to force herself on Rachel to suddenly being completely at Rachel's mercy. But it's mostly very minor.

Why don't you write more, because you really should. :)

It' been a great day today, two great fics.

My preciouses...

I'm trying very hard to find words to describe how awesome this is, and I find myself failing quite miserably...

Maybe it's not perfect. MAYBE. But damn, does it ever come close!