Please write more, I am so curious at what is going to happen next!

I love this story! I hope the next chapter will be out soon :)

Amazing story. Please please please please please keep writing, you can't leave me hanging. Love your you for such an amazing story,,, so far!:-D

It's getting really good

Amazing story, and your writing

are you going to update this at all? I love the host fanfics and you left off with a cliffhanger...

good story, i like the plotline you've done,

it's really interesting to read,

and i like how you've mixed everything up (:

xx

nice job! you really captured all the characters perfectly!

update please!

I think its... WANDA! Hee hee. I love Ian's perspective. Great job. I love AU Host stories.

i think its melanie and Wanda - i wants my vitural brownines

Willow Avenue hey? LOL. You're right, it is obvious...BUT EPIC! You went and made me feel all special, ah shucks. :P

I realized that my last review was atrociously long!

So, I will try to make this review even longer. OH YA!

I lost the game.

Big freaking suprise!

I really like this chapter...but could you try not to swear so much? LMAO! TOTALLY KIDDING! AHAHAHHAHA!

Boy do I wish I had some kls;zdhgdhg

HOLY SHIT! I WAS JUST ATTACKED BY A FLY!

Anyway, like I was saying, I wish I had some .

I think should change his name to .

COULD YOU IMAGINE!

"What are you doing?"

"Going to the store to buy a can of Phil."

AHAHAHA! Priceless.

So I don't think I can update any of my stories today but when I do I will put a little surprise in there for ya :P

I have a question WTF is formatting and what was wrong with mine?

I realize that the first chapter of TTF was seriously screwed up. I apoligize.

It's too late to apoligize!

TO LATE!

OMG! When I was reading your story near the end there I thought the authors note was part of the story. I was confused for a moment but that's me!

Okay, I think I succeeded in making this a very long review!

Jolly good chapter Maya.

I lost the game.

And...

WE WAN'T TO INVEST IN YOU!

Sound familiar?

AHAHAHAHA

ROFL

The End

I mean

See ya later,

Jesus

oops I mean

Willow the other christ

OMG! Could it possibly be...Ian? Am I right or am I right? AHAHAHAHA! Guess who? Oh I'm such a creeper. WAIT! It's Jesus, isn't it? Who art thou Vladimr. WEE! I am making -5 sense.

Okay, so you wanted constructive critisism?

STOP BEING SO EPIC AT WRITING! You make the rest of us mere humans feel pathetic. Seriously this is BETTER than the Host...GASP!

Ya, I said it.

You had better update because I really DO know where you live. MWAHAHAHA!

I sincerely hope you know who this is or you could be going WTF! and move away. Which would be sad because I like watching you through my telescope. AHAHAHA! OMG! KIDDING! That's just plain terible. Or should I say atrocious. AHAHA! Great word.

Oh dear, it smells like something died in my room and then vomited it's insides. Ew. I know.

Ahahaha! See ya later aligator!

Vladimir :D

I mean...

The Greatest person in the world...

The most epic of people...

The one...

The only...

(when does this end?)

AHAHAHA!

Okay!

JESUS!

No, it's just Willow.

Almost as great, but not quite.

Okay, Maya, I haven't actually read this yet. But I need you to check your facebook messages. Please :)

I like how this story is more from Mel's point of view. It seems like it could be really good. keep writing

Very interesting! I definitely want to see where this is going. Update soon! :)