|Reviews for Baby Steps|
| Julia 5/5/13 . chapter 3
Please write more, I am so curious at what is going to happen next!
| Julia 3/22/13 . chapter 3
I love this story! I hope the next chapter will be out soon :)
| iloveIanO 2/4/13 . chapter 3
Amazing story. Please please please please please keep writing, you can't leave me hanging. Love your you for such an amazing story,,, so far!:-D
| iloveIanO 2/4/13 . chapter 2
It's getting really good
| iloveIanO 2/4/13 . chapter 1
Amazing story, and your writing
| aliexia 7/7/10 . chapter 3
are you going to update this at all? I love the host fanfics and you left off with a cliffhanger...
| sarah12345 1/4/09 . chapter 3
good story, i like the plotline you've done,
it's really interesting to read,
and i like how you've mixed everything up (:
| crazi4thecullens 11/23/08 . chapter 3
nice job! you really captured all the characters perfectly!
| sunshineonacloudyday 10/20/08 . chapter 3
I think its... WANDA! Hee hee. I love Ian's perspective. Great job. I love AU Host stories.
| Chibi-Chanx 10/7/08 . chapter 3
i think its melanie and Wanda - i wants my vitural brownines
| IntoTheSkye 10/3/08 . chapter 3
Willow Avenue hey? LOL. You're right, it is obvious...BUT EPIC! You went and made me feel all special, ah shucks. :P
I realized that my last review was atrociously long!
So, I will try to make this review even longer. OH YA!
I lost the game.
Big freaking suprise!
I really like this chapter...but could you try not to swear so much? LMAO! TOTALLY KIDDING! AHAHAHHAHA!
Boy do I wish I had some kls;zdhgdhg
HOLY SHIT! I WAS JUST ATTACKED BY A FLY!
Anyway, like I was saying, I wish I had some .
I think should change his name to .
COULD YOU IMAGINE!
"What are you doing?"
"Going to the store to buy a can of Phil."
So I don't think I can update any of my stories today but when I do I will put a little surprise in there for ya :P
I have a question WTF is formatting and what was wrong with mine?
I realize that the first chapter of TTF was seriously screwed up. I apoligize.
It's too late to apoligize!
OMG! When I was reading your story near the end there I thought the authors note was part of the story. I was confused for a moment but that's me!
Okay, I think I succeeded in making this a very long review!
Jolly good chapter Maya.
I lost the game.
WE WAN'T TO INVEST IN YOU!
See ya later,
oops I mean
Willow the other christ
| IntoTheSkye 9/19/08 . chapter 2
OMG! Could it possibly be...Ian? Am I right or am I right? AHAHAHAHA! Guess who? Oh I'm such a creeper. WAIT! It's Jesus, isn't it? Who art thou Vladimr. WEE! I am making -5 sense.
Okay, so you wanted constructive critisism?
STOP BEING SO EPIC AT WRITING! You make the rest of us mere humans feel pathetic. Seriously this is BETTER than the Host...GASP!
Ya, I said it.
You had better update because I really DO know where you live. MWAHAHAHA!
I sincerely hope you know who this is or you could be going WTF! and move away. Which would be sad because I like watching you through my telescope. AHAHAHA! OMG! KIDDING! That's just plain terible. Or should I say atrocious. AHAHA! Great word.
Oh dear, it smells like something died in my room and then vomited it's insides. Ew. I know.
Ahahaha! See ya later aligator!
The Greatest person in the world...
The most epic of people...
(when does this end?)
No, it's just Willow.
Almost as great, but not quite.
| AntisocialButterfly13 8/3/08 . chapter 2
Okay, Maya, I haven't actually read this yet. But I need you to check your facebook messages. Please :)
| Madeline 7/21/08 . chapter 1
I like how this story is more from Mel's point of view. It seems like it could be really good. keep writing
| Banana71588 7/20/08 . chapter 1
Very interesting! I definitely want to see where this is going. Update soon! :)