Pretty good. I never read the pokemon manga though. I would like to though.

Aww!! This was really good;

Dawn can be such a ditz...

Paul got a kiss!

Dirty boy though for looking up

Dawns skirt!

Ok, so does Paul say thank you because he doesnt have to deal with the idiotic Dawn anymore? Or because she kissed him? I'm confused.

LOL...I loved it, so cute!~

Lol_ xD That was cool and you kept them in character, good job! ^^

this was really cute :-)
nice job ^_^

This was so cute... I loved it, you have to write another one.