A great take on Rukia's pov. nice job!

Beautifully written. The descriptions are vivid, the pace perfect, and I love the way you play with your theme from beginning to end, examining every phase and angle of Rukia's relationship with Kaien. Very well done, I love it.

This is beautiful. A well-written and poetic story. Great job.

I loved this, God, I adore the style and the symbols tied in this. And I officially love for Kaien-Orihime thing, it was really beautiful thing to add there. Lovely work.

aw! cute!

I like Kaien-dono so much! I'm actuelly a IchiRuki lover but I like KaiRuki too! xD

Too bad there aren't much KaiRuki fanfics..

"Kaien would have liked Orihime, Rukia thinks, as Nejibana throws her ragged, bleeding body through the air (there is pain, waves of it but the feeling is far away). He would have made her laugh and ruffled her hair and eaten her food, then later lie and say he liked it even when he didn’t."

For God's sake, man, you're killing me tonight! *fangirls* Kaien and Orihime would have loved each other. The image of him fighting and loving the fight, and then stopping dead and launching into bliss at the presence of Miyako is so gorgeous I nearly squeed out loud. I wish I had your talent.

This is absolutely amazing. I loved it, I think it was so well written and I loved how the end of each part seemed to go straight into the next, if you know what I mean? As if her life's flashing before her eyes or something.

This is great, I'mma gonna check your other stuff ;D

Really sad. You did a great job expressing her emotions of fear, and guilt.

Very nice. I like how you tied in 'distance' with 'hearts' and 'dance', bringing the whole work back around to Kaien's advice to Rukia, as well as her defeat of the Espada.

that was sad but beautifull