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Dan Phantom
2008-11-14 . chapter 14
You know, Regan forgot about switzerland, which has one of the lowest crime rates in the world. Just pointing that out.
Vah
2008-09-05 . chapter 51
I'm reading again this chapter and keep wondering why Branch is with this behavior. I mean.. Jack and Regan had an argument because of her lack of explanation about her life then Branch got defensive, but he didn't see anything, did he? He got defensive saying that Jack was looking for a way to sleep with her, but just after they first major argument. That's odd lol
I'm hoping to see the explanation in the next story!
detective-sweetheart
2008-08-31 . chapter 51
Hmm.I'm really starting to wonder what's up with Branch, but I have the feeling it'll all end up coming out sooner or later. He does have a point, though, and what he's saying does make sense. The reference he made to that particular case made sense, too.

I've really enjoyed reading this story, and the way you write the characters, particularly Jack and Regan. I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for the next story. :D
TheWorldWillNeverBeWhatIExpect
2008-08-31 . chapter 51
grr...

stupid stubborn Regan...

anyway..

I loved the story, no matter how frustrating Regan and Branch are.

Cannot wait until the next one, keep up the good work!
mccoylover
2008-08-31 . chapter 51
Only thing she could do, given the situation, but that DOSEN'T mean I have to LIKE it, lol.

YOu already know how fabulous I think this sotry was and your writing in general are!!

Jack wouldn't be Jack if he hadn't made a play for her inspite of Arthur, and Regan wouldn't have been Regan if she just threw her job away.

But we all know it aint over yet, lol.
New story ASAP, please!!
RebeccaInley
2008-08-31 . chapter 51
Wait! What? That's the end? Like the end, end? No!

Oh, I was so horribly unprepared for that, which makes it even more sad. But enough of my moping. I (as I think you know by all my reviews) LOVED this story. It truly was fantastic and just so well written. Your ability to just keep going and going (and updating regularly!) amazed me. Congratulations on a job well done!

I will be anxiously awaiting your next installment!

-Becca
Vah
2008-08-31 . chapter 51
OH MY GOD! I want to kill Arthur RIGHT NOW! I was so happy thinking: "Well, in the next chapter, we'll be able to read Jack and Regan FINALLY together!"
And then Arthur Branch comes up and.. screws everything up. *crying* But hey, that doesn't mean that there isn't any feeling between them! On the contrary, they really like each other.
By the way, it was so cute and gorgeous the proof Jack made to Regan.
Loved this story! Looking forward to seeing more of your stories!
mccoylover
2008-08-31 . chapter 50
“I like my women sober enough to give consent,” McCoy said. “And without vomit in their hair.”- Just one of countless lines in this chapter that makes Jack McCoy a man impossible to resist.

You made us wait so long...but God...this was worth the wait.

Flawless bonding for our couple.

I am chomping at the bit for the next story so we can see this relationship move forward!
D'Arean
2008-08-31 . chapter 50
Hi, I loved this chapter. It is about time that the relationship between Jack and Regan moved on, one way or the other. I hope, you will continue your series.

Andrea
RebeccaInley
2008-08-30 . chapter 50
Oh, so wonderful! I was completely prepared to yell at you for being a tease after the first go-round with Reagan and Jack came to a halt and then you whip out that ending. I thought you did a fabulous job of portraying Reagan's fears. Also (and I have no clue how you did this), great job on making Jack come off sincere because everything he said could have sounded like complete bullshit, but it didn't. I will be horrendously sad to see this story end, by the way.
detective-sweetheart
2008-08-30 . chapter 50
Glad to see these two are finally starting to talk things out; nice job with this.

And only one moer chapter? Here's to hoping we'll see another story soon, too. :D
TheWorldWillNeverBeWhatIExpect
2008-08-30 . chapter 50
gagh.

Uh.. good update...

Awesome!!
TheWorldWillNeverBeWhatIExpect
2008-08-30 . chapter 49
Oh Regan... your going the wrong direction.. go the other way.. go hug Jack..make him feel better!

awesome update!
detective-sweetheart
2008-08-30 . chapter 49
I'm starting to wonder what's going on with Branch, but I have the feeling that'll all be answered at some point later on. Nice job with this chapter. :D
TheWorldWillNeverBeWhatIExpect
2008-08-28 . chapter 48
Oh god, update, I'm sitting on the edge of my seat here!
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