i like this story abe so cute and poor annie she must be so embarrested lolz i think this story of your is cute it adventure moments and funny accident i say you have a good story going here =3

LOL are you going to put more soon? I hope you do this is good

Great idea! This is a really cool story. Keep up the good work. :)

Oh dear. How utterly embarrassing it must be.
...d Mudokkuns even HAVE females with 'curves'...?

I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!

Sorry >_>"

I rememeber watching my sister play Abe's Oddessey and Exodus (I was always too little to play them, I died a lot)
Then I got Munch's Odessey on X-Box when I was 11 or so and I actually beat it before my sister did, Now I'm playing it again and I'm obsessed lol.

Lol

Abe has seen my bra.

that made me laugh, keep writing!

I aught to kill you...WRITE MORE!!

Jeez, and you say I'm bad a cutoffs...

Hey... nice job. Me like dis story.

Oh, sorry, you've probally heard this a million times...



HURRY UP! I DO NOT LIKE WAITING FOR AWSOME STORIES FOR TOO
LONG!

Ha! Awesome! Please update again soon!

I loved your new chapter! I think you've portrayed Abe exactly right. He's a really sweet character and I really laughed at the end part. I'm so glad that you put up this new chapter and I can't wait for the next! I'll be keeping my eyes open! Have fun writing!

Hey. I've just read your fanfic and I really like it! I think your writing is great and if you read this, then I sincerely hope that you'll write more even though you published this a while ago. I can really see you writing a great story and I'd love to read more. Also, I'm a HUGE fan of the Oddworld games and you've brought back several pleasant memories for me and I'm quite interested in your OC. I hope you consider finishing this off! :)

Oh this is nifty! :] I can't wait to read more of it.

**! that's good: write more, write MORE, WRITE MORE!

It was good. Short. Very short. Write more!!

Why would you stop there? you're almost as bad as me!
Keep writing!

Well that doesn't happen everyday...Keep writing!