 Eclipsegirl4488 2009-08-16 . chapter 18this is an awesome story. u should do #1 |
 TheVertigoDancer 2009-08-10 . chapter 2WILY! |
 TheVertigoDancer 2009-08-10 . chapter 1good |
 Snuffles-sweetie 2009-08-10 . chapter 18Wauw. I loved this fic! I don't really mind either option...pregnant or not I want a sequel! Both could be very much interesting...even if the fact that she's carrying Max's Spawn of doom freaks me out...it could be interesting...
As long as there is a sequel...with Paul in it...I'm happy! |
 xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx 2009-08-07 . chapter 18I loved this story! I thing i'd like option 2 because the thought of her carrying Max's baby kind of freaks me out! |
 patriotgirl101 2009-08-07 . chapter 18I loved this story! I don't really mind if Rain is pregnant or not in the sequel, I just can't wait to read it if you do write one! |
 lordofthebreakdance 2009-08-07 . chapter 181! #1 All the way!great story and I'm totally syked for the sequel! |
 Peya Luna 2009-08-07 . chapter 18 i´m definitely voting for a sequel, but i´m not that sure about the pregnancy, for one, the way i understood you the birth would kill rain, and given her pain right now i would say that the pregnancy itself would be difficult to say the least also, plus i don´t think that anyone, including rain, could love a child that was conceived by rape AND is going to be a mini-max to booth... though i´m by no means a fan of abortions - and i have no idea how/where a vampire could get one - i would say its the best solution in this case...or you could have her miscarry, that way she won´t feel guilty for killing an unborn. aside from that, i find the development of star you´ve started very interesting, and i want to see what choice she´ll made in the end. so please, do a sequel! |
 MidnightNailPolish 2009-08-06 . chapter 18YAY!
i love this story;;
it is so sweet what happen between Paul and Rain;;
yes i do want sequal!
but idk if Rain should be pregnant?
please keep up the awsome work!
:)(: |
 HermioneandMarcus 2009-08-04 . chapter 15great chapter update and i can not wait to read more of it as soon as you can please |
 Peya Luna 2009-08-04 . chapter 15poor vinnie...but with max being unconscious now the others have an actual chance to kill him - since david is knocked out cold and paul still shackled rain will have to do it, and fast! lord knows how fast this old bastard heals+recovers!! |
 TheVertigoDancer 2009-08-04 . chapter 15(No review) HA! :) |
 Green Day Gal89 2009-08-04 . chapter 15i totally love this story! its awesome. i could never come up with something as smart as this! ^^)> |
 WolfxAngel 2009-08-04 . chapter 15No! Poor Vinnie! :( |
 Amour Mitternacht 2009-08-02 . chapter 14OH CRAP! MAX?
That's a little disgusting, why Max? Why not someone else?
*tears*
Great chapter though, update soon! |