Hello! I just want to say that I love your story! It was so cute and sweet! I hope to read more of your fanfics in the future!
~Tia-Chan~

loved it.

Vivid. I could almost see and taste the blood from your description. Ichigo seemed to be true to himself, which is hard to pull off in a romantic fic, especially when there's action involved. ^_^

There were two things I noticed. First, that your tense seemed off. I'm not good at that sort of thing, but somehow it felt a little awkward the way you were phrasing things. Second, I liked that Ichigo and Orihime were communicating while kissing, but I think it could've used a little finessing.

Overall, I thought it was good. I hope you keep writing!

Aw...
I hope they stay together too!
Awesome fic.
Thanks for writing!!

This story was really nice. You really brought it to life. I am a huge IchiHime fan. I wrote a story too. You can check it out if you want. It's called The Power of Love!

Absolutely lovely. The passion is so real, as is Orihime's fear. Wonderful job. :) I hope to see more like this from you soon.

So sweet and poignant... I just do not see how people pair him with Rukia - they are so brother/sister to me