 RokudaimeKazekage213 2009-12-01 . chapter 22Awesome story. One of the best fanfics I've read. Please keep updating. I really like where its going. |
 Basil to Blithe 2009-10-29 . chapter 20I just want to pause for a moment, as I'm reading, and say that you are /good/.
This is fantastic. |
 kazetoame 2009-10-01 . chapter 23 I've had this story on my list to read for a long while and I've finally finished what you've put out so far and I must tell you, I am hooked. I like what you've done with Harry, it makes sense in a way. I also like the way the story is presented with flashbacks and present time mixed in the same chapter. I eagerly await the rest of the story.
Thank You! |
 DR43N4T0R 2009-09-13 . chapter 23hm... I like this. It deserves more reviews. |
 Howlermonkey77 2009-09-09 . chapter 23I just read this whole story so far in a couple of sittings. Great work so far. I found the flashbacks a bit confusing at first, but now I think they work quite well. I also found Hermione's frequent cursing a little out of character, but now I like how more creative she is with it. Keep up the good work. |
 iloveharrypottertoomuch 2009-09-09 . chapter 23classic harry. |
 Wonderbee31 2009-09-09 . chapter 23Nice chapter, and look forward to finding out more about Andrea, as well as seeing more of Harry and Hermione as a couple, not lusty little rabbits, but as a warm and loving couple who've been around each other for so long that they know most everything, but in this romantic love, it's all new for them, and it makes their lives with each other exciting again. |
 dexterZ 2009-09-09 . chapter 23a refreshing plot compared to all the other post hbp/dh stuff floating around. please update soon :) |
 Iciles 2009-09-09 . chapter 23No this story is different, quite good though. You know, normally I would have stopped reading a story like this after the first chapter because it's really not a Harry Potter story, just a story where the main persons happen to share the same names. Even the bit about magic is rather redundant, it would work without it just as well.
But it so happens that I'm still reading it after chapter 23 so take that as a compliment, the story stands on its own merits, not just as a HP spinoff.
Have fun
Iciles |
 cajuncoffee 2009-09-05 . chapter 22I'm reading this story, and I think it's one of the better stories out there. I do hope you are able to continue it. Also, don't worry so much on how many reviews you're getting, even if you aren't getting any. Your stuff is good, so put it out there. Full stop. |
 The Violinist's Quill 2009-09-04 . chapter 22Well, personally I'm still interested in this story, and I've just taken nearly an hour to read through it all so I hope you update. Frankly, I'm surprised at how few reviews you're receiving because the plot is very interesting and well constructed. I like your style of writing and the slow and *believable* pacing and build-up.
Please write again soon! |
 disinterested 2009-08-29 . chapter 22oh no! i hope you get better from that block. i really like this story. it'd be a shame to have it unfinished. |
 Wonderbee31 2009-08-27 . chapter 22Well, I for one am glad I found this today, and it's turning into a cracking murder mystery. I'm looking forward to a lot, including maybe Molly and her harpiness if she finds out things have changed between H/Hr, as well as who's the killer, and if it's someone we've seen onscreen, or someone off camera that's related, or someone who's related to Harry's time at Hogwarts? Looking good. |
 kaylee-jane-potter 2009-08-26 . chapter 22i usually read/review through portkey, but i hope things start flowing for you. i enjoy this story. |
 Kitty Malone 2009-08-24 . chapter 22Hey,
I really enjoyed this story so far. I love the interplay between Hermione and Harry. This is such a great story it would be a shame for you not to continue it to the end.
Cheers
Kitty |