Oh, wow! That was an extremely well-written work!
I enjoyed reading it. I especially loved the dialogue, and your watered-down version of a lemon. The sexual tension you created between the characters was so tangible!
Keep it up~

hello. It's a really great story about our favorite couple. I love it.

man when i read this, a song pop into my head, the song Tu boca by Cabas. Good work please update son!!

Well, I enjoyed reading that immensely ;] there hasn't been many kuramaxbotan fics out there anymore, but this story got me back into the craze. I hope that there will be a sequel soon, you can't leave readers on a cliff-note like that (or at least I hope not!)

-lilxyakusokuxx

that youko is very sneaky, xD... (i'd feel more creeped out than scared if i were botan or kurama, lol) but anywho, i do have to agree with everyone else though; your writing has improved a lot. the spelling errors are minimal, but the story itself covers all of that up. this was another oneshot that was thoroughly enjoyed!!

I love this history! Beatiful! I love KB!

i really liked it
but i got confused
so youko are they two different people now?
or is it another demon?

brilliant! another brilliant story from one of the legendary KB writers! i really do hope you write more! *cough* sequel *cough*

Lol, the title kinda reminds me of Harry Potter. Returning to the matter at hand, I find your story truly interesting and well-written. Not to mention how you awesomely kept Kurama and Botan IC. A very good job indeed.

i really like this u should do another lol great story

Loved the story JD! I hope you write some more Kurama and Botan stories in the future. It is hard to believe that you only have 3 reviews so far. If you had put this up 2 years ago, back when ATF was still getting updated, you would have like 13 reviews for the story in one day. The good old days. Anyways, great story, a few miss spelled words but, still a great story. Jen is right! This story might deserve a sequel!

nice ^-^

i liked it good story

Oh... Koishii... I liked this VERY much... You took the idea and made it your own. ::Grins:: Your lady is very pleased, indeed.

I love the way you write Kurama -- I always have. But now your Youko is starting to grow on me, too. Hmm... Perhaps I can seduce a sequel out of you...?

Your writing skills have also improved, Jimmie. This was so very well written and easy to follow. Excellent! Two thumbs WAY up! And, thank you, baby, for writing this for me.

All my love!