Oh no! Who got shot?! Don't leave it hangin' like that man, it ain't right! :)

~pepper

PLZ PLZ PLZ finish this, its so awewsome

Awesome writing, keep it up and you might actually get a full review out of me.

Very Nice I hope you were planing on finishing it. Oh would you please.

ah, fun with cloud gazing and family glomps! XD

out of curiosity...did you by chance get Delilah and Amelia from fireflyoflight's story? I was just curious since she's a good friend of mine and I beta read for her =D

If you'd like, I would be more than happy to beta read for you too =D it probably wouldn't take but 15 minutes per chapter ;P

if you're interested, PM me =D

oh I almost forgot...*glomps* YOU HAVE D'ART! XD

looking forward to chapter 7 to see where this story goes!

lol! that last line earned a giggle from me! The way you write Sasha and Milla's relationship is just too cute! It's like they know each other perfectly and are perfectly at home with one another~!

there were a few spelling and punctuation errors in this chapter...I was curious if you had a beta reader?

anyway, on to chapter 6!

OMG YOU STOLE MY CLOSING LINE FOR ONE OF MY CHAPTERS! *throws book at you*

XD lol! ah, I don't care! it made for a squee-tastic close for the chapter.

I did notice one or two small mistakes in this chapter...1) is that Kitty's last name is actually spelled "Bubai" not "Babai"

the second one isn't really important because there are a number of ways to spell Quentin...so i wouldn't worry about that...

Loved the banter between Bobby, Benny, and Lili, and I also loved all of the Milla and Sasha scenes XD! the van sounds great XD

ONWARD TO CHAPTER 5!

*SQUEE!* *GLOMPS* I *LOVE* THE SONG "TWO GUITARS"! "two guitarts", "pust guitarra"("Let the Guitar Play") and "dogorri dilynnu"(no idea if i spelled it right...but it means "Those Were the Days, My Friend) are some of the songs I've been studying and learning on my guitar and violin! gotta love those gyspy folksongs!

Sasha having a volkswagon made me giggle (I immediately imagined him in some fruity looking completely OOC beetle!)and things are about to get interesting with an equation like Sasha with a volkswagon with Milla taking psychic children on a road trip XD!

ONWARD TO CHAPTER 4

*giggles* I'm loving the character interaction between...well...everyone! you're doing a great job keeping everyone in character *giggles* I loved the 'lets annoy sasha' games and the ever-boyish 'rough rock paper scissors' XD

sasha was just BEGGING for the '009' comment XD and the kindly way that Truman treats Raz is too cute X3!

ONWARD TO CHAPTER 3!

hoo-boy! I haven't even checked out the psychonauts section here for a while!

the summary looked pretty interesting (I thought about writing about something similar once with the campers joining in on one of Raz's performances, but it was like one of those fleeting ideas that I didn't really think on or come up with enough material to elaborate and create a plot...so kudos to you!)

the spelling and grammar ect. look great, and already i've gotten a few giggles out of this XD especially the part where Raz is messing up Lili's countdown XD!

ONWARD TO CHAPTER 2!

well i didnt notice any speling errors this time, thats good. the chapter was good as usual, please update when you can

no need to thank me, i was just trying to be of some help. so their going to watch raz huh? i hope that goes well, but with them you never know. um, green and blue? no offense, im fairly sure he wears the red one when he performs, but its your story so i dont have any room to judge what you put in. please update when you can

P.S. there was one spelling error, but i couldnt re-find it. sorry

it seems pretty good so far, but im not sure if anyone told you yet, but you misspelled Razputin. sorry if someone did though, i thought i should let you know. please update when you can