:)
such extensive using of words.
really REALLY nice. :D

Very awesome fic. I love your writing style and your descriptions of surroundings, they fill out the story very nicely.
Such an interesting universe and the great writing just make it a pleasure to read.
:)

now im reealy interested...

update.

.SOON.

I had to reread some paragraphs twice and even go back to previous chapters so I could understand... but it was all worth it. Hahahahaha!

This is getting good...really good... I like the way it's written, very descriptive and it hooked my interest right away. Nice work, can't wait for the next update!

oh, my, so cool really^^

fascinating, very interested to find out who this mystery person is and adore that tenten rose the the ranks so quickly, also loving how you're still using the elements of naruto but twisting them to create something entirely new and as i said, fascinating
definately looking forward to where this is going to go

I don't know how you do this. I cannot even IMAGINE reaching the literary heights that you seem to achieve so easily. Where do you get these ideas? They're FANTASTIC! (Although, I recognized mithril in there, so I know where one came from, at least ;-) And it's not just the creativity that seduces me. Your storytelling skills are superb. It's like you're weaving your language together like an expensive, beautiful tapestry and all I can do is wish that I was that good at manipulating the English language.

I'm drooling to find out who's watching Tenten as she ever-so-elegantly slaughters her opponents. I was a big fan of Michael Phelps, but if there were ticket sales for the Blood-circus, I'd be first in line.

I almost hate to beg you to update this story, because the rest of your delicious stories deserve updating, too. So, I'll just raise my glass to you, silently toasting and envying you in the same breath and anxiously await your next update, whichever it may be.

Cheers, my dear!

Mystica

I'm glad you updated this story. I like the concept of it, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it.

Great start to a story I look forward to reading more of. I like your writing style and how you give details about the universe you are placing the characters in. :)

I;m not much of a scifi reader, but I find this story very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next! =D

Talk about interested . . . I've barreled past 'intrigued' and am now well on my way to 'obsessively spamming'. Fantastic, not that I'd expect anything less.

Congrats on the 100!

Now, on this chapter...I got a little confused. I think its my fault,I'm not into science-fiction(but I am into Tenten). I apologize. I get what the Imperial Fight Fest and what it means. And I get that its and only(right??)full of slaves/glaitors. But right after "No one but the stables got to supply gladiators." I was lost. I apologize again. I am still very intersted in reading this story and maybe the next chapter will clear things up for me. Please update soon!!

Ah. What a new plot. And I don't think I've ever seen a Naruto science-ficton piece to have so many details. You must really love science-fiction or you're from the future! I really like how you made Lee a robot. And Ino a Jayd'thi. And Tenten's a...thing?? I really want to know what Tenten is. If you've already say, I apologize. But I really do find this interseting. I will have to keep my eye on it.

I just love how you fit the characters into a whole new storyline... and still somehow manage to to keep them in character. Wow...