Femslash, FTW

...I just realized that I'm possibly the only girl alive who likes femslash without being a lesbian... Hmm...

awesome story, update soon

A pairing with Samus and Zelda. Gotta say that while I never thought that the two would ever together in any universe, this is a rather interesting and unique take on both of them.

A few issues, however. First off is Samus's characterization. Yes, what she had gone through would definitely leave scars and some serious issues for just about anyone, but that's what makes Samus Samus. That fact that she's gone through the shit she has and come out whole at the end, capable of taking care of herself and being a fantastic person at the same time. However, for the sake of the story, you're characterization is fine.

Second, you've got quite a few grammar issues and issues with what words you're using. Quite a few times it feels like you're missing part of the sentence you're writing and more then once you mean one word, but say another. For example, the Doubles fight between Samus, Zelda, Marth, and Ike, you called Marth a Princess in one sentence, when it's clear that he's male and you stated as much earlier on. This could be a simple mistake, but other such instances are quite common throughout the entire story.

Overall, not too bad of a fic, and certainly better then a LOT of the crap we see around normally. And you've actually used characters that don't get too much attention, IE: Anyone not called Marth, Roy, or Ike.

I'm very much enjoying this story so far. I anxiously await the next chapter.

Glad to see you updating again. And nice chapter. I liked a lot of the self-reflection you put both of them through, especially for Samus. Gives us a real glimpse into the character.

Though not much development between the two of them as of yet. >_< Perhaps next time.

please continue this story it's really well written and i would hate to see it go unfinished.

You made me cry! It was so sad! That never happens to me when I'm reading a sad story. You have truly awesome writing skills.

Maan, i'll tell you something. I've read some Zelda/Samus here and around, but the truth is: None of them even can be compared to this fanfiction of yours.
They relationship construction, the plot, samus' characterization, it's all awesome.
Please, keep on going on this fic.
:D

Whoo-hoo! I love shoujo-ai! I think it's WAY better than yaoi! Ew..yaoi is gross. Anyway, this story is awesome. Thank you for posting it!

Very very good story, update soon!

aw poor samus! i hope she can move on because of this experience! this story is really good (sorry i didn't comment til now i was on a reading frenzy) i hope you update soon!! it would be sad for a interesting story like this to be left incomplete. so please update!! i'll be waiting! ^-^

I hope you update an unbreakable bond soon I love evangelion stories and I wish that there were more of them.

I hope you update Unbreakable bond soon that is my favorite

wow, epic story,
nice descriptions pf samus's mindset,
sorry for being picky but watch for errors like

“Mama…where did you go? Why did you have to go?” WHY COULD I GO WITH YOU?!”

im not sure if that was what you were trying to say, but again im being picky hehe,
great work

Awsome chapter and incredibly feeling. Think you did a great job of showing Samus losing it but slowly getting back together. Can't wait for the next chapter.