 maskedgoddess 2009-11-16 . chapter 23 Ohh! Im not ticklish either! I used to be, but I "grew out of it"? aww Draco :( |
 Papa Thom 2009-10-30 . chapter 23Thank you very much for the reply... I tried back later in the day and it worked.
Raked over the coals... given them what they deserved... the Dursleys got what I think most people think they were due.
Working my way thru DUTY now... thanks again for a great tale. |
 Leighta Greenleaf 2009-10-16 . chapter 29Loved this!
I'll soon be immersed in the sequel! YAY! |
 etherian 2009-10-02 . chapter 29This was a terrific story. Snape was just perfect and his relationship with Harry and Draco was just wonderful. Lucius was a complete, evil, bastard. So very good. :) |
 Jtennis 2009-09-15 . chapter 10I am so close to wishing I was at Hogwarts so I could cuss Ron out! At least his brothers have more sense than him!! |
 librarywitch 2009-08-26 . chapter 29This was an amazing story. I loved how you wove and bent cannon to fit your plot. Well done, each of the character were extremely believable. I hate it when they do not act like the folks we have all come to know. Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent. |
 Severus' Egyptian Goddess 2009-08-22 . chapter 29loved your story n.n and i love sev lol so it all works out. incidentally, just making an observatory question based off your pseudonym, are you Zoroastrian? the 'Zarathustra' has been bugging me through the whole story XD just wonderin'. |
 Kirsti-Lee 2009-07-22 . chapter 28I read this from start to finish, and it was quite enjoyable. Your version of Harry's second year was quite unique and different. My main criticism, as cited by some of the other reviews was the sappiness, although the word I hand in my mind was corny at some points. To be honest, it felt like at times that angst and my love of said genre that was all kept me reading. That being said, your command of the written word is outstanding, and there's definitely 'meat' to this story that keeps the reader interested.
The chapters are long, so there is plenty to read and keep the reader interested for this alone. The characters cannot be faulted for being OOC, because I feel like you took what you saw from small bits of their personalities and enlarged them. All in all, a good story, and one that had me reading for over an hour. |
 madelinesticks 2009-07-11 . chapter 29I LOVE IT!
For some reason I reeally love these "bye Dursleys, Snape wins" fics. The only one I don't really like is Lily's Charm, because I'm really a very impatient person. Sequel? HAPPY DANCE! |
 mannd1068 2009-07-10 . chapter 29Excellent story |
 Marifw 2009-07-08 . chapter 28Great story! I really loved it! I'm gonna start reading the sequel now! |
 Miss-Fleur-Riddle 2009-07-03 . chapter 28I think you should do more in this AU :D it's really sweet! nice write - well done! |
 LittleMrsAdams 2009-06-30 . chapter 29that was a great story! the dursleys got what they deserved! and im glad that harry and draco have a good father in snape! |
 bookivore 2009-06-29 . chapter 29This is a better Severitis story in that it has a plot beyond 'boy meets father'. However I think it sticks a little too close to the book plot (though your version is well done) and turns a bit sappy. Also, the abused child theme is very strong in the beginning then has very little influence on the plot in the second half, which is probably why I find it a bit sappy in that part. But I am still looking forward to the sequel and find the writing strong. |
 Rori Potter 2009-06-29 . chapter 28That was great. |