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maskedgoddess
2009-11-16 . chapter 23
Ohh! Im not ticklish either! I used to be, but I "grew out of it"? aww Draco :(
Papa Thom
2009-10-30 . chapter 23
Thank you very much for the reply... I tried back later in the day and it worked.

Raked over the coals... given them what they deserved... the Dursleys got what I think most people think they were due.

Working my way thru DUTY now... thanks again for a great tale.
Leighta Greenleaf
2009-10-16 . chapter 29
Loved this!
I'll soon be immersed in the sequel! YAY!
etherian
2009-10-02 . chapter 29
This was a terrific story. Snape was just perfect and his relationship with Harry and Draco was just wonderful. Lucius was a complete, evil, bastard. So very good. :)
Jtennis
2009-09-15 . chapter 10
I am so close to wishing I was at Hogwarts so I could cuss Ron out! At least his brothers have more sense than him!!
librarywitch
2009-08-26 . chapter 29
This was an amazing story. I loved how you wove and bent cannon to fit your plot. Well done, each of the character were extremely believable. I hate it when they do not act like the folks we have all come to know. Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent.
Severus' Egyptian Goddess
2009-08-22 . chapter 29
loved your story n.n and i love sev lol so it all works out. incidentally, just making an observatory question based off your pseudonym, are you Zoroastrian? the 'Zarathustra' has been bugging me through the whole story XD just wonderin'.
Kirsti-Lee
2009-07-22 . chapter 28
I read this from start to finish, and it was quite enjoyable. Your version of Harry's second year was quite unique and different. My main criticism, as cited by some of the other reviews was the sappiness, although the word I hand in my mind was corny at some points. To be honest, it felt like at times that angst and my love of said genre that was all kept me reading. That being said, your command of the written word is outstanding, and there's definitely 'meat' to this story that keeps the reader interested.
The chapters are long, so there is plenty to read and keep the reader interested for this alone. The characters cannot be faulted for being OOC, because I feel like you took what you saw from small bits of their personalities and enlarged them. All in all, a good story, and one that had me reading for over an hour.
madelinesticks
2009-07-11 . chapter 29
I LOVE IT!
For some reason I reeally love these "bye Dursleys, Snape wins" fics. The only one I don't really like is Lily's Charm, because I'm really a very impatient person. Sequel? HAPPY DANCE!
mannd1068
2009-07-10 . chapter 29
Excellent story
Marifw
2009-07-08 . chapter 28
Great story! I really loved it! I'm gonna start reading the sequel now!
Miss-Fleur-Riddle
2009-07-03 . chapter 28
I think you should do more in this AU :D it's really sweet! nice write - well done!
LittleMrsAdams
2009-06-30 . chapter 29
that was a great story! the dursleys got what they deserved! and im glad that harry and draco have a good father in snape!
bookivore
2009-06-29 . chapter 29
This is a better Severitis story in that it has a plot beyond 'boy meets father'. However I think it sticks a little too close to the book plot (though your version is well done) and turns a bit sappy. Also, the abused child theme is very strong in the beginning then has very little influence on the plot in the second half, which is probably why I find it a bit sappy in that part. But I am still looking forward to the sequel and find the writing strong.
Rori Potter
2009-06-29 . chapter 28
That was great.
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