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Da Blaq Tiger 2/20/06 . chapter 3
its tyte... Im not a Gundam fan, but this is pretty darn spiffy
Amanda 7/21/02 . chapter 3
this story is so cool. i hope more gets added to it soon.
iNsAnE nO bAkA 5/1/02 . chapter 3
Next chapter soon! Love it!
Demon child 4/30/02 . chapter 3
OOOHHHHHHHH eho have to continue!
Mara 11/25/01 . chapter 3
I really like the third chapter. It's amazing how, even after so many years, Relena and Hilde can get along so well. I love how the story has turned out so far, and i can't wait until Hilde shows 'fei that she really did earn her knighthood. Also, I was wondering where you got references for Midevil/Renaissance times (or if you're just going by what you know), because I think it would be really cool if you had some actual execises that knights did, or some supposedly real magical chants and incantations. Lastly, please have the romance part(s) come in soon, I don't think I can wait! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Ezekiel Klitiras 11/20/01 . chapter 3
Nice chapter. A little rushed. Do continue,
Lillia O'Conner 11/18/01 . chapter 2
I looooooooooooooooove it so far, oh please, please, please, write more. I want to know, I want to know, I want to know what happens next. I hope you get the next chapter up soon. You're a very talented author, I don't tell that to many authors, but I think you are. Please continue to write, I love it. bai-bai -Lillia-
Millie 11/9/01 . chapter 1
Love your story and love you!
jess 11/6/01 . chapter 2
i love this story you have to keep writing on this one.
Ezekiel Klitiras 11/5/01 . chapter 2
Great chapter. The actions are great. Do continue.
Li-chan 11/4/01 . chapter 2
Great chapter, please update soon. :)
Brenda 11/4/01 . chapter 2
I like once more. Keep it up, and keep me posted! Have any title ideas? Something to do with Med evil times and or magic. Are you going to have any more Relena and Heero scenes later on like the one in the beginning?

Brenda
mama-sama 11/4/01 . chapter 2
nice! great chapter! a kick -saa relena! cool! more?
Mara 11/3/01 . chapter 1
That was so good! Especially for a first chapter! I really really really really want you to write more *as she adds this story to her favorites list*! Please! Pretty please! With a cheery on top? Do you like cherries? I like you story. *continues for awhile with mindless babble* I love the way you had Heero and Relena meet up at 10 years old. Are you going to show her training? Or just skip to a couple years later? Or you could always do small clips of what her training was like... or show it through flashbacks... Well... anyway.. I just wanted you to know how good I thought it was. I hope you continue soon. And, if it's not to much trouble, could you e-mail me when you post a new chapter. Thanks for writing such an enjoyable story!
Brenda 11/3/01 . chapter 1
oh man, you must continue writing this story. It is good. I want to see what happens. please let me know when you have another chapter out.

Brenda
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