Oh well done! That's one thing that bothered me too when reading the books - that Snape, who is the only teacher the Slytherins trust and admire, repays their trust by throwing them to the wolves. As Head of Slytherin, he should have taught them the truth about Voldemort and told them what being a Death Eater really means. He could have made a difference, could have prevented at least some of them from following his own path... but his allegiance to Dumbledore was more important to him than the children in his care.

Your English is just fine, and your story was very well written. It was short, but you really managed to convey the Slytherins' bitter sense of betrayal. I wish I could read Spanish, because I'd like to read more of your work.

Hola Helena,

just found the new story you wrote. It's really amazing. I had a feeling that it was a portrait of Snape Draco hung up, but the twist that he is not seen as a hero but as a traitor is great. I never expectet that.

Creo que voy a traducirlo ahora mismo al alemán para que tus fans alemanes también puedan leerlo. Como te parece?

Besitos
Katja

I'm Spanish too. I'm not used to read in English but I adore your fics and I've done an effort.
It's a delicious fanfic.
I totally agree with the main idea cause sometimes I've thought the same as you.
Congratulations!

ah!.. oh my god!...

But, what are you doing in the english ff??... te has pasado al lado oscuro?...ah!... my god!!..jejeje...

creo que me gusta mas el espaniol!!...

:D!


un saluditos!...

Hi!
I think your english is excellent, but I´m not one to talk, as I´m spanish myself.
I loved the spanish version and I´m happy to see english people can now read your wonderful tale too!
See you soon ^.^

Hi Helena

Well I don't have a perfect English but I really do think that you have a wonderful English. You had a good grammar and a good range of vocabulary.

As for the fanfic, I really like the plot. It's original and I completely agree with your view. And you know, Lo bueno, si breve, dos veces bueno (I don't there is a equivalent in English, sorry)

See ya soon

-- Psy --

(sorry por no escribir en ingles pero me da perecita >_

Hi, Helena! Congrats for your coming-out in the english fandom! I love your fic and agree with your particular vision about Severus. It makes me think about the slytherin loyalty. Kisses!

¿Qué, te has pasado al idioma de Shakespeare?
Ay, mi Severus, es un incomprendido...
MARTA

Your English is great! And I love the story.

wow.

A very interesting take of events. I really didnt know what to expect but it was most certainly not that. Its quite true though, Snape for all his intentions did allow so many to do horrible things even if it just was a guise.

I heart this story.

cool

As another who speaks both Spanish and English, you did much better than most could hope for, you're good at English. :D

As for the story itself, damn! I liked this a lot. Very short, but good, and an interesting take on things. I thought about this once, how many people Snape would have to step on to keep his disguise up.

Sigue escribiendo!
Besos! =)

Aw, very interesting take on things! Very good!