MISSED YA!!

Missed you. Not bad.

Can't wait! Love this , the plot twists are amazing

Not much to say but keep this up.

Aw man, Ketamé's so evil, just like Venom.
Oh, speaking of which, the next chapter of "Day of Wrath" is up. R&R.

Your OC is the very epitome of an overpowered, attention-hogging Mary-Sue.

Very nice, but you mispelled honest, abandon, swear, and I'm not gonna say the B word cause I don't curse. However, I will say that it's spelled with an A, not an E.
Chapters 2 and 3 are up on "Bloodthirsty".

Good story I can see a grammer error.
I'd suggestChange "changs" to chains so the readers know what your talking about.
In chapter 2 on the 5th line of sentences.
But a spellcheck or grammarcheck on your computer should take care of that.

Nice job. Sorry, I was busy today and yesterday.
I was playing NiGHTS today and I was fighting a boss. It was green, ugly and looked like a witch. It also had six kittens. I WAS DOWN BY ONE KITTY AND I LOST!! WAAH!!...

You are very creativce with your OC's , I love this and really hope you can update soon!

Aw...how sad. This reminds me of how Espio's father died...wait a minute. You got that idea from my story, didn't you? C'mon, be honest.
Happy 17th Birthday!
My birthday's not until Tuesday, the 26. I'm gonna be 15.
And yeah, that Sarah girl posted a review for "Nightmares of a Sorcerer" and she said that I didn't spell Salley right. Really, you can add an E to her name. It says so in a book of baby names.

I'd suggest a grammercheck or spellcheck on your computer for this story just some mispelled words as the other reviwer said.
Sometimes there's not enough info inbetween unless you want the reader guessing keeping it a mystery who Dark Arms is.
Because it switches back and forth between Black Arms World and Robotniks.
But the story is excellent as it is.
It just needs some more editing and clarifying.
The story just needs more editing that's it.

Aw...Sophie and Keenan sitting in a tree.
K-I-S-S-I-N-G!
First comes love, than come marriage.
Then, comes--

Salley: Jordan, shut up! Stop making fun of Ariana!

Me: Alright, geez! Update soon!

~Jordan the Cat

Debut, okay? Nice chapter.
Sorry I didn't get to review it earlier. I had some cleaning up to do in the house and I went swimming in my pool.

See ya soon.

SM11

I know about the Organization 13, but these Guys, The Black Coats are NOT them. though they DO have the same outfits, but their outfits has some RED stripes! there are like... 20 million members of the 'em and counting! shockin', huh? well, look out for Part 3.