...hilarious.

Umm...I love you? I don't think there's anything else left to be said (well that I haven't said already with your other fics)

LOLOLOL.the ending was WIN!lol!so it was axel n demyx eh?XD
this was rly a great read, lift up my mood ^o^

Was.. that Axel and Demyx at the end? O,o
Lol, that was hilarious!

I LOVED it! ha ha!!

(but..it's not rated k+. sorry. xPP)

Your random plot bunnies make me happy.

-Spark

What you accomplished is a new level of LeonCloud banter *swoons and falls to the floor, clutching new found level of banter*

I loved the little bits of description that made me squee with glee because it only makes their characters oh-so-more real, like "Cloud flicked a jelly-baby through the air and it ricocheted off Leon's head."

Bah, the banter, as always...genius. I envy your Banter Sector within your brain. Mind**ed Scale. I don't know if I squee'd enough initially but I think that is worthy of Real Life vocab.

I do rather Heart Larxene a fair amount these days. The idea of her and Cloud teaming up for the 'Greater Good' (Larxene and Greater Good? Together? In a sentence? Wha?) is totally believable and Cloud only wanting to mess with Leon's pretty little head.

My favourite bit though was the tiny little detail of "...before spitting out the jelly-baby that had been forced onto his tongue by another..." Leon likes it really, I know I would 8D

mouahahaha! I really really love how you write them. There's something so realistically casual in their interaction way of acting and relationship, manly, not overly emotional, adult. I don't even mind the oocness, as it works. Cloud is fabulous in this one, the completely relaxed way he acts in this outfit, the kiss, everything. I also love the fact that you used Larxene, it's not often that she appear related to Leon and Cloud, and again, I like the mature feeling it gives.
Awesome job again ^^.

The world needs more of this type of fic. Thank you.

This was hilarious! As always you seriously do some of the funniest and wittieset stories ever! Jelly bears are they like gummy bears? Sounds yummy C: Hehe Axel


~Wuv the Playfulness

That was HILARIOUS!

Nice plot! It was funny, a good one shot! :)

That was amazing. I love how you portray Cloud as such an amusing **; I like him this way. Cloud as a roomate, that must drive Leon up the wall. And that was just one instance in his whole college life. lol. This is going to turn in to a war between Leon and Larxene, and it's all Axel and Demyx's fault! And I laughed my ** off at how Cloud didn't get ** until he lost his candy. lol!

Lolz!! that was hilarious! ^_^

although from the fic description I was thinking Cloud would be dressed like Dr. Who...

that was awesome! :)
luves it! and the caterpillars lol :D