 Parker.IN-V.Fate 2008-12-08 . chapter 7What? Kyouya? No offense, because you let your reader decide, but I mean come on Kyouya! Well never mind...
I loved how you didn't revel it!! that was so cool! I thoroughly enjoined it!! |
 Parker Fate 2008-12-07 . chapter 1 That was Great Rachel! I loved it!The whole mask...uh... thing was smart. I also love the forbidden romance between the two. I did notice tha at one point you said "It killed, killed, killed me to see him take up his act now..." Not to criticize but that was very Maximum Ride-ish. But it's ok kuz I do that a whole lot too!!
Great Job!
~Fate |
 falling.petals 2008-08-18 . chapter 7Aw, man! I was too late to vote. *sigh* Ah well. Still, excellent excellent ending. I thought Tamaki would end up with Haruhi just because of the circumstances of the story, but you know, I love Kyouya so it doesn't really matter.
Oh Hani. I don't really know anyone who supports tha HaruHani pairing anyway. But poor guy, no votes...
Definitely correct about the manga. Which I should catch up on. I don't know which ending I'd rather have, though. Great job with your story and I hope to read more from you. :) |
 kajoo 2008-08-16 . chapter 7:) :D ^_^ e I'm so happy that you finally posted the chapter, I was totally on edge! Yay, even though it wasn't Tamaki I don't care it was still awesome (plus I didn't really care who it was as long as it was well written as you could tell from my last review). Oh and by the way I totally had a dream where I was checking my email and an alert for your story came up so I read it (I don't remember the exact chapter words though :( ) and she picked Kyouya O.o scary huh? lol! :) :D ^_^ ok so great chapter and I have a question. Is the story going to end here or is there going to be alternate endings (which I'm all for by the way unless you continue with this one :D) or are yu going to continue with this? Please watever you do just KEEP WRITING! Lol. Okays Bye. Happy writings!! |
 Jess 2008-08-16 . chapter 7 Your story is so cute! I loved reading it. It was great to read something about the ridiculous mannerisms of the club and how everyone had a mask to present society. Keep writing!
(I love Haruhi/Kyouya too!) |
 Suicidal Fantasy 2008-08-16 . chapter 7aw. that was a sweet ending...very fluffy, well, as fluffy as Kyouya can be. i like the way you wrote it, with the focus on all of them, and not just on Haruhi and Kyouya.
i would like alternate endings! i think that would be fun...(cause you're writing it! hehe) depending on how many endings you want to write(cause i want the twins def! haha), i think i'd even like a honey ending...
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About the manga, i think if Tamaki dies/leaves/can't be with her, she might end up alone(I'd like it if she ended up with one f the twins, lol)...but i think it would be more on Haruhi and not on Tamaki if she didn't end up with him(ie, Haruhi having trouble dealing with her feelings, or not fully understanding them, etc.)Tamaki did just find out he had 'trama'...so he might not be able to stop calling her 'daughter' either...that would seriously mess it up imo. |
 Rayne Hunter 2008-08-15 . chapter 7AAH! I can't believe how close Tamaki's tally was to my Kyoya's! That's so not right!...So in the manga, the latest chappie, was she totally kidnapped or what?! I've been freaking WAITING for a 'dasterdly' plot bunny to pop up in the actual Ouran universe. |
 HTApprovedChick 2008-08-15 . chapter 7SQUEE! yay Kyoya! I love this ending, and, in fact, I love it so much that I say go for an alternate ending. If you really wanted to, you could write one for each host, but if i had to pick my second favorite, I would choose... Mori. And Hunny gets my pity vote - i'm not into the loli-shota thing (as you might have noticed, since i go for Kyoya and Mori) but he's still a cool character. Keep up the good work!
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 kpy424 2008-08-15 . chapter 7Yay! I'm so glad to finally find out who she chose, and even though I like Tamaki and Haruhi together, I love Kyouya. I just don't know if I like him with Haruhi. I love putting him with OCs, though I know a lot of people hate OCs in general. I actually started writing a KyouyaxOC fic, which reminds me that I need to stop reading fanfics and finish my summer work for school so I can go update my fic (I promised a long chapter after I got back from vacation a week and a half ago, and I haven't posted anything yet). Anyway, I loved this last chapter especially the way you described how they had each changed a little, and especially especially, how you described how Kyouya changed. I like "the ice cube had melted" and "his smile...now left them in fits of ecstacy". That was good stuff. I also like how Haruhi and Kyouya kiss and stuff in front of all the girls. That's funny. Okay, I'm done now, I have work to do. I'll just say one more time, great fic, awesome final chapter. |
 loretta537 2008-08-15 . chapter 7yes alternate endings please |
 Tawny 2008-08-15 . chapter 7 Actually if you are going to do the alternative endings you should do one for each of them. I am kinda sad for the lack of votes for Hunny even though I always thought she fit better with either Kyouya or Mori. |
 bringme2life 2008-08-15 . chapter 7 ok even though it wasn't tamaki, I LUVED IT! Ur a great writer! and the latest left me with a cliff-hanger! I CAN'T STAND IT! I mean all i keep thinking about is why did Tamaki's lawyer kidnap Haruhi? what do you think? |
 OhMyGoshsickels 2008-08-15 . chapter 7 Yes! :Punches air: Go Kyouya! Eh hem, Any who, I think you should do alternate endings, but you might have a hard time writing the same chapter in different ways, so good luck. Oh, but please, don't do an alternate ending with Honey. I might scream and then have to bang my head against something sharp.
-OhMyGoshsickels |
 idioticsmile 2008-08-15 . chapter 7yay! i *heart* kyou x haru!! x] |
 Shanehxx 2008-08-15 . chapter 6wah!
hard choice!
I personally like them all! I won't actually mind whoever she picks...
seems a bit like Tamaki though...just the kind of things that they said.
You are a great writer by the way! I might read other stories of yours.
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Shan |