|Reviews for The Next Life|
| Mrs. Abject 7/29/08 . chapter 1
That was quite a surprise at the end, but you wrote it in a way that would actually make sense. Interesting theory, too. I like the way you've written the conversation and Maria/Lisa's thoughts, it feels very natural for the character. Enough details are given, but not enough where it feels like an implausible amount of exposition. Good job!