 LogicOfFire 2008-07-25 . chapter 1Hii guess who? *waves*
I liked it, but I did have a few beefs with it. Typical YYH OC, a tomboy with some special power ;) I know, it's hard since YYH fanfiction has been done to death. I don't mind, really, since she doesn't seem overly strong. I like her reactions to everything.
Oh, Kurama doesn't go to Sarayashiki, he goes to Meiou High, and Hiei doesn't go to school at all! So I was sitting her like, wait, why are they there?
And yes the whole "so my writers spirit can be whole and soar" thing was overly dramatic ;) All in all, I did like it though! This was one of my favorites when you were writing it before, so I'm glad you're taking this one back up first! :) Write more...pweaassee? |