Reviews for The Exile's Homecoming
mgaa 4/1/13 . chapter 1
oh wow i love this..
awriterofstories 2/9/13 . chapter 1
Nice, but you got the age difference wrong. Ayano is seventeen when the series started, and Kazuma is twenty-one. So it's a four year difference. But other than that, I liked it.
Godschildtweety 8/16/12 . chapter 1
Really good
DragonHalf 7/31/12 . chapter 1
cute
muhcelle 5/18/12 . chapter 1
That was absolutely amazing. I love the dynamics between them, and I would love it if you were to continue on with this story. Please consider doing so. Your fans and I would love it!
Imashitowareto 2/22/12 . chapter 1
i'm really hope that it can be has next chapter!
animelover931 2/7/12 . chapter 1
That was nice and very creative plz more im begging u
Sailor GaOn Donut 10/5/11 . chapter 1
nice
SilverIceRing 7/17/11 . chapter 1
A cute little story. Too bad that the show/novel didn't continue. Ah well, it was interesting to see Ayano acting so quiet for so long. A rare treat, even if it was a bit sad.
greenmayiel10 3/31/11 . chapter 1
oh my.. that was amazing..

it would be most wonderful if you made this into a long fic.. XD
Victoria 3/28/11 . chapter 1
I love it make moreee pelase it was awesome , plzzz make ayano have a best friend guy and kazuma jet jealouse it would be awesomeeee
Victoria 3/28/11 . chapter 1
Make moreeee plzzz its amazing i love it , make ayano have a best friend guy and máxima get jealous
MoonPrincess623 10/22/10 . chapter 1
Ahhh, that was so sweet! Even if it was kind of bad that her family offered her up like that. I kind of wish that this was epic or at least had a few more chapters.
Halo Knight Zero 2/22/10 . chapter 1
I like it. too bad it was a one-shot thing. i wouldve liked it to be more though. oh well...it was still good.
ItaSaku29 2/7/10 . chapter 1
Aw! This was so cute! I love how awkward they are with each other at the beginning.
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