This is a wonderful AU piece of work! I should have reviewed ages ago but I was deferred by my own laziness and by my thinking that I couldn't review since I am not an actual member of FFN. Anyways, I love it very much as in Chapter 2, Asch was able to display his worry and affection in a very Asch-like way. Luke is just Luke, who you wrote out very well and I love how the mind communication thing in between the two causes a lot of confusion and embarrassment on Luke's behalf. Jade's sarcastic remarks are hilarious to read over and over again, especially the ''I assume from a man and a woman'' part. That part does also imply something darker behind it, which it utterly expected of Jade and his enigmatic personality. I love that in the first chapter, you bothered to actually calculate how many days there were in each month of the year, their names and so. I was stunned to learn that there was 765 days a year on Auldrant. That is more than twice as long as our year on Earth is. That must mean that if the number of years a person can live on Auldrant is the same as our lifespan, than the total number of days an Auldrant being can live for is more than twice as much. I apologize for my rambling. But thank you very much for having written this fanfic up to this point! I would love to see you write some more chapters and possibly finish this fanfic as your fans (including me) are eagerly waiting for you to keep on writing! Thank you!

I really love this story so please update as soon as you can!

'A'!! Your alternate universe is very well thought out. I like the substitution of the church as a magic academy and the different relationships the characters now have. 'w'. Something I'd like to bring up, in chapter 3, near the bottom the page, Jade refers to Asch as 'Asch Luza Kimlasca-Lanvaldear' while in this recent chapter he is 'Asch Libero Kimlasca-Lanvaldear'. Someone else may have addressed this but I thought I should mention the inconsistency just in case. I look forward to the next instalment! Hope to hear from you soon.

Yeah I like this story! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow! This is really good! You should keep writting! I can't wait to see what happens next! ^.^

Oh ho! What an adorable story you have here. I think I'm in love. XD I really hope you continue this; there are so, so, so, so, so few good slash fics in this section. It is depressing. :( I'm really liking the AU you have going here, and I can't wait to see more. Wonderful job!

Pm me if interested in joining an rpg site for Tales of the Abyss. We need members!

I like this story i hope that you add more to it.

What an awesome story! I can't wait to see what will happen to them all on their journey back to Baticul! Please update soon! ^_^

No i dont want it to stop! PLEASE UPDATE! ^^ I cant wait Luke=Huggles lol

aww, so cute. You should make more sleeping scene with Luke and Asch. So this time Natalia is the bad girl huh? Lol, funny plot twists although I agree with it. I'll be looking more to your works. ^^

Wow, this is awesome! I really enjoyed reading it! Please update?

I like this fic. I hope you keep up the good work.

"Libero" is a present form of the verb "Liberar" (to liberate) in Spanish.

Yo libero
Tú liberas
Él libera
Nosotros liberamos
Vosotros liberáis
Ellos liberan

;)

i really like this story and i hope u will continue writiting this one ^^