Ok, I really like this choppy narrative. Just so freaking TERSE! I mean, not some stylized thing full of meaning, but rather openly standing against that perspective. (I like postmodern books for whatever reason) So... yeah, "Then nature called. He left." Just awesome!

So yeah, I really did enjoy this piece.

Wow, that was really good. It's easy to forget that Mick was a soldier and that he'd already been through so much by the tuime he was turned. Thanks for putting that in better perspective for me.

Oh, Mick. Poor Mick. Lucky Mick most of the time, but poor all the same. I'm so glad we got some war footage out of "What's Left Behind". I was looking forward to it from the time he mentioned it in episode four. But I wanted more, too. Thanks for giving it to me. I wanted Mick and Beth to have a conversation about it sometime, somehow. You've done wonderfully well with this and I can't wait to see your next contribution.

Excellent.

I hadn't read anything addressing his war stories. He knew how to fight. But he had to know the enemy. How could you prepare for an enemy like Coraline?

seriously amazing

You do so much with so few words. I envy you, I tend to ramble in my writing. Thanks for the shout out. If my review brings these results, I'll keep reviewing everything you write. I liked all but the way you tied in #6 was especially good. Thanks.

:)