o.O Whoa. This is awesome! Nice job giving the background of the characters. Please continue, this getting mord interesting.
-Rand0mV1rus
"So can you tell me what exactly does freedom mean, if I'm not free to be as twisted as I wanna be?"
-Disturbed

I don't normally like oc's but these guys are intriguing. Keep up the good work!

Creepy. i say continue. It's refreshing to see something different. There aren't too many dark fics around here.

sweet

My opinion is that you should continue. Besides, I haven't read anything dark really lately. This first chapter seems pretty good. Hope you do decide to continue. And yeah, the finale was really freaking awesome!