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| fishertowers 2008-09-24 ch 1,  | abuseLoved This! FT |
| timano 2008-09-11 ch 1, | abuseI laughed aloud when I read this story--and I don't usually laugh aloud for *any* reason. A superb story. 10 out of 10 stars. |
| Kazza 2008-08-16 ch 1, | abuseOh, what a great rescue of Donna and her memory. Love it! |
| Mary 2008-07-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcellent -- I liked Journey's End but hated the ending and him making Donna forget. I can't imagine what our Dear Doctor was thinking. This makes so much sense. Great job on the scientific stuff, and I hope some day you do another chapter where Donna and maybe Sara have a few words, once and for all, with the Doc about leaving people behind! Great job! Til then... |
| A Rose By Any Other Name36 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abuselol I loved the last couple of lines! XD This was really good, even if I didn't understand most of the techno-babble :S XD |
| Cary44 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abuselol, brilliant! |
| Starlite1 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abuseLOL! Don't stop there!! Excellent work on the technobabble! |
| trecebo 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseNicely done! I haven't seen the last two episodes yet--blast it all, but I love how you manage Jack. You make his questionable actions a bit more palpable by relating them to the past. It's excellent to read. |
| IactaAleaEst 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseComplete? COMPLETE?! But what happens when the Doctor finds out? *pouty face* MORE! That's all I'm saying. P.S. If you can't tell, I'm a hardcore Donna fan. :-D Jack's pretty awesome, too. ;-) |
| abigailc 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseVery well done and an interesting solution to Donna's problem. |
| Innogen 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseLove this! Interesting, because once upon a time, the Doctor was reported to have a human mother, but supposedly that was, what? - genetically engineered out of him? So to me, Donna becoming 1/4 Gallifreyan makes perfect sense! If the Doctor waited a bit before dumping Rose and Doctor 2.0, I wonder if the same thing could be done for them? ::I don't care about that aspect of this story, you see, so no need to really go there:: I would love for the Doctor to come back to Earth and be a little flummoxed by the fact that Donna remembers. I think he is more freaked out that she remembers *all* his secrets than the fact that she is still alive. Like the fact his mother is human. Heck, maybe Donna is his Mother? ::Icky:: Love the comment about Jack and Volcano Day - I kept hoping to catch a glimpse of him during that episode, and was disappointed when he never turned up. I hope you write another add-on to this. ~Innogen |
| HRInuyashaFan16 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abusevery good cant wait for more. |
| if-you-lie 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseWow...this is really good, and really, REALLY funny at the end. Good job! |