A great poem fic. Very good.

Great Poem, I think it really captures what the feelings the Tin Woodsman would have had while he stood rusted to the ground. =)

Pretty good, work on long stories though. You have a knack for writing and just doing small poems is breaking down your ability!! continue writing!

A-MA-ZING. I wish that I could write poetry as good as this. Hats off to you!