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| KCS 2008-07-24 ch 1,  | abuseAW! I love that - just how I see it happening, more or less; and the bit about him teaching them a little order was perfect. Thanks! |
| bcbdrums 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abuseah, i like this one. very well written, cockney and all. and very IC of the irregulars and of holmes. i also like the description holmes gave of them all stuck in the little room. i couldn't help but picture dirty hands getting grime all over furniture. maybe that's why holmes was thrown out of his rooms in montague street ;) |
| Cat 2 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abusevery good and very sweet. |
| The Fool's Hope 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseAw, this was great! I got a really clear mental image of the little gang--Adorable :) Well done! |
| Chewing Gum 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseI can't recall the exact quote, but I do remember Holmes saying all they needed was a little organization XD |
| E Phoenix 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseAw. This is lovely. And Holmes is very Holmesian here, with just a slight bit of humanity, when he thinks at the end how it might help them, and that is just how we (the readers) like him! Perfect, KS, very nice job here. :D |
| aragonite 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseBoy you gave me massive flashbacks with that one. I live in a county that has many varied streets with strata and terrain over a thousand years in age; I can tell the altitude I COULD be in by the colour of the soil...and the type of rock...but I never realized that rule would apply to cities until I started reading Holmes. Wow, thanks for excavating those memories for me! |