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XkatarinaXILSB 8/18/10 . chapter 10
Funny plot and no major spelling errors, but the author notes were downright annoying -_-''
N0L0NG3R1NU53 1/15/09 . chapter 2
Um . . . I have one thing to say. You really need to warn people before you switch pov's. It's hard to tell who's it is untill someone says there name. Here's an example.

(Sakura's POV)

God, he was so cute. And then, he talked to me. "Hey Sakura!" He said. I blushed. "H-hi Syaoran!" I said.

So, yeah. I hope it doesn't sound rude in anyway! _
N0L0NG3R1NU53 1/15/09 . chapter 1
Lol! Evil Syaoran!
Jordy rox ur sox 2/20/08 . chapter 10
WOW! I loved it! Its such a great story! (Although some of the more sad moments where kindda ruined for me because I was listening to "bicycle race" by Queen, and well... yeah... I can't get through that song with out smiling. Especially because it makes reference to the song "fat bottom girls" and my brothers spent about amonth running around singing that... Imagine, a six year old running around the mall singing "fat bottom girls make the rockin' world go round..." yeah... we got some weird looks... but otherwise!... ) Your a really good author!
whitewave16 1/17/08 . chapter 1
This is funny, esp. the scene where Eriol experiences flying sickness. Priceless!
Danielle 10/19/07 . chapter 10
*claps while laughing hysterically*

That was an AMAZING story! I adore your writing style. One of the best if not the best fics I've ever read. 8D
tomoyohime8 2/4/07 . chapter 1
hey!

at first, the fic didn't seem like much and i put it away for storage in my flashdisk.. but i gave it a second chance.. and im definitely glad i did! not only was it well written, it was actually funny! funny as in it kept me laughing the entire time! i had to bite my tongue to keep from laughing out loud (it was midnight, and people are more likely to believe that a girl laughing her head off at that hour was doing so because of demonic possession)..

i especially loved eriol's comments, especially during the part when they were in chinatown...

i also admire the fact that you finish your fics before posting them up.. i hate waiting... especially when the fics are that good..

domo arigato!
extra-victory 11/30/06 . chapter 10
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! SEQUELL!
extra-victory 11/29/06 . chapter 1
YOu ARE A SUCCESS(I DON'T CARE IF I SPELT THAT WRONG)!

AFTER ONLY ONE CHAPTER, IT'S ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES!
xXThedoctorxX 6/29/06 . chapter 1
good
Kizuna no Kioku 8/9/05 . chapter 10
You made me laugh so hard when I read this fic and your other CCS ifcs "A Camp Adeventure Gone Wrong"! I hope you write more CCS fics soon!
The Myth Keeper 7/14/05 . chapter 10
O.M.G That was one of the funniest stories I ;ve EVER read! I can't wait for the sequel! You are awesome! XD
AfGhAnCuTiE 7/5/05 . chapter 10
lmao omg i LOVE U! u made my FREAKING DAY! i lAFFED like cRAZI lolz i LOVED DIS STORY u got a BIG sense of humor tho it was kinda weird in SOME places it was a VERY FUNNY ONE INDEED! congrats gurl! lolz keep it uP!
Tearful Joy 5/27/05 . chapter 10
Well? where is it?

JadeWing: EH*is shouting over cd player*

You Know what i'm talking about..!

JadeWing: *shakes haed*

THE * SEAQUEL, *IT! IT'S BEEN TWO-ISH * YEARS, *IT! WHERE THE * IS THE * SEAQUEL?

or did i miss it on your list-thing? haha.. if i did, i'm sorry...

...if i didn't, i'm so * not!

*I'll be back layder.i'm

going trick-or-teating

on the highway, dressed

as i dear...*

Tearful Joy
Smile Damnit Smile 5/27/05 . chapter 9
'Ricky Glassy-Ass'...?
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