|Reviews for On the Written Expression of a Heart's Desire|
| EZS 1/18/12 . chapter 4
Awesome story, have Milla and Tal fall in love though. PLZ PLZ Plz update
| audrey 7/14/11 . chapter 2
i thought i'd let you know that i have also read the series. it's great!
| Owner Pwner Dashie 11/21/10 . chapter 4
Hi! It's my first reading for the'Seventh Tower' fanfics, so I'm a bit hard on this... Anyways, onto the review.
I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the fluff going on inside of it. Between Milla and Tal... I wonder what's going to happen next, in chapter 5, but as I can see, you haven't updated your story in a while... I really hope that you do, as you now have another reader waiting for you.
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| Mika123 11/21/10 . chapter 1
I have read the Seventh Tower. I know what you mean. It is such an awesome book yet so little people have read it. The story you wrote is pretty good. I really thought that something like this would happen in the actual book. It could Hilight how they don't have Spiritshadows anymore.
BTW Have you read any of Garth Nix's other books? The Keys to the Kingdom is good too.
| anon 11/16/10 . chapter 1
very good fanfic, you should write more. please?
| Artemis Greye 2/16/10 . chapter 1
a good enough beginning, to an obviously rose-tinged plot. the relationship between tal & milla was only lightly brushed upon in the books, so it is an interesting way to continue the story. i hope to see more.
| Jinke 12/4/09 . chapter 4
I think that it's a really good fanfic please update D:
| talon hand 2 9/4/09 . chapter 4
hey, good story! The only reason people don't read seventh tower is the cover art. Grr.
| Icezera 9/4/09 . chapter 4
I have to say, I read this series while I was in like, what, 7th grade? That's a long time ago. I had the feeling that it was a children's series and I never had any reason to check out the fanfiction associated with this series before. Well, I just got a feeling that it would be cool if there was a mature, extremely clever, and great piece of fanfiction based on this book and the relationship between Tal and Milla. What do you know, you had it.
I love the poems in the story-they are so fitting of what a desperate boy like Tal would write about, especially when in love with such an independent girl like Milla. The way you weave in elements of the world into common English that we use is demonstrative of the creative mind behind the writing. And to top it all off, your writing skills are surely top-notch. I sincerely hope that you will continue this story!
| Guest 8/12/09 . chapter 1
hey i used to read the seventh tower books constantly. and you capture the characters and the soul of the series perfectly. awesome job
| Elsil 7/30/09 . chapter 4
The Seventh Tower was an awesome series of books. It's great that there exists good fanfic of it, such as your story. I hope that sometime you get the inspiration to continue writing it.
| cschaferdramaqueen 7/26/09 . chapter 4
Very good so far! The characters seem to all be in order...:) Even Ebbitt. And he's hard.
| SageofSkies 6/9/09 . chapter 4
Oh, you totally suck for not finishing this. Why couldn't you have just written a crappy fic, so I wouldn't care? Why?
| Roe 3/6/09 . chapter 4
Cool, i really like it, i hope u write more! i always wondered what might happen with those 2! I like the poetry too!
| toad13 1/21/09 . chapter 1
your not the only one who has read the seventh tower bookes i got yelled at for reading the seventh tower i cant take my eyes off these books. My fav charet is milla and tal!