hm it would make a nice story though... if u did come up with a plot... i would like to kno y demyx decided to come to his apartment in the first place... he just did it randomly... entirably adorable when demmy went THIS IS THE GREATEST GIFT EVER on zexy though! and the part when he atacked his space bubble and oped his itunes! hehehe dem dem is adorable...

Wonderful job. I really liked this one. Vanilla is one of my favorite songs, and When the Day Met the Night is my favorite Panic At the Disco song!!

*stares with mouth hanging open*
Well... all was good... loved the lemon, until I realised... WHERE THE HELL DID THE PLOT GO?!
Why was I at Zexion's house?! YOU NEVER EXPLAINED!

(Demyx RP-er)

I did enjoy this, but I felt like the lemon was out of place. It would have been just as well to give it an ending that didn't end in them sleeping together, or something after the lemon other than their goodnights. Not too much, just a little bit to let the readers know that there may be something in the future for them.

I did however quite enjoy the begining and I like your writing style quite a lot. You get points for creativity and for a story that didn't put me to sleep.

I look forward to seeing more of your works.

P.S. you don't fail.

SKE! ^.^ {is bouncing up and down in seat happily} One of the sexiest Zemyx fanfics I've ever read! Great job!!

aw!
hooray for zexy and demmy-kins! :3

This is... so great~ I REALLY love it, thus the reason I've come back multiple times to read it >w>...
I especially like how you did the ending. Many people just throw something together for the endings of their oneshots, but I don't get that vibe with this one~

That was... really good. I love the dynamic of it. And the fact that you had business!Zex and beatnick!Dem. That's just awesome =).
This story so deserves more reviews.

Hehehe, how weired, I was listening to Vanilla (Unplugged/Night time version) before clicking on this oneshot.
I liked it.
=]

Yay! Zemyx! Strange fic, though...(sorry to say that.)

OMG! I love this story... Please write another one!