This is an awesome story! Very well written and very creative!

-Lvmj

Whoa. Great chapter.

Oh and you haven't found the Bunny Hood Running Man Guy Thing? xD He usually is found out near the trees near Kokiri forest and it's usually around sunset. I usually see him then.

Anyway, great chapter. I like the rabbit part.

Awesome awesome awesome! :D

I can't wait for another update, Krazi!

Ganondorf is so cute as a kid! Why'd he get all mean when he grew up? D:

I like this story a lot, particularly the emphasis on the harsh realities of Ganondorf's homeland and the creative way you introduced him to Hyrule.

The only thing that bugs me is that there are a lot of grammar and spelling issues, maybe you should have someone proofread it first.

I wonder where this is going to go...

Keep writing!

nice. (: