This is just about to get really interesting, I can tell. The first two chapters are very well written; clear, concise and not OOC. Keep up the good work! I'm waiting for the next chapter with baited breath.

ugh i hate havoc why'd he have to just barge in at that time even though he did have a good reason but still
anyway i hope you update soon
i want to find out the rest of what roy was going to say to riza
and more royai yay!

aw thats so sad i cant wait for the rest

Aww this was good I can't wait for the next chapter update soon

I like it. You make me want more. Good writing style. The characters are on target. I like seeing Roy in private with Riza. I usually like Roy Ed but you make me want to see more of Roy Riza. Good allusion to Ed being like a hyper puppy on a chain. Totally spot on...I will have to remember that. Al in armour (right?) having tears in his "eyes". I like the plot. I am starting to worry about our boys. I cannot believe Ed thought about finding a Fullmetal lookalike. Love the start. Please update soon.

Great chapter, I love how Riza deals with Ed, though I can almost feel that he's not going to listen to her. I love the royai in the chapter, really sweet. I cant wait for more!

wow thats great!! please continue! :)

Wow... I really like this.

Is it just me, or does it seem like a Prental!Royed and a Royai mix?

Wow this is really really great, I'm completely hooked already! I really like where this going, I cant wait to see what Riza is going to do about this, as I cant see her just taking this lying down! I really do hope the update does come soon as the suspense will probably kill me while I wait! Great work, more please!

awsome i cant wait until u update and if u dont i will not... give u this awsome peanut-butter cookie!!hahahah

wow this is really good i like it alot can't wait for the next chapter update soon

This seems good! Really good! I want to read more!
Update soon!

I'm liking it already. :] I can tell this is gonna be a good one, so update soon.

CH.

Good start. Would like to see where you go with this.

i love the idea already
i'm imagining how everyone'll be taking it but i can't wait too read about it
oh and i can't wait to see the royai that hopefully is coming up soon
anyway update soon
El~Vida
-Duzi