I love this story! It's written so well, Matt and Mello are so in character, I imagine them exactly like this. Also, you're the first writer who has managed to describe the severity and torture of such burns.
I guess this story won't be updated, looking at the date... pity :(

'Ello. I liked your story. The way you described Mello was fantastic. The only thing was that you spelled through wrong. Just thought I'd let you know. :)