nice 1 sony. hope you care to make a second part of it. it was lovely yet funny, 5/5 you did well amigo mio(my friend)

Good explination on why Unohana wears her braid how she does. My favorite part of the story was when Unohana and Zakari showed up to the meeting wearing each other's coats! That was priceless!

Wow. Didn't see that coming. Nevertheless it was a really nice story.

this was funny, a hickey, LOL! awsom!

incredibly and ridiculously cute. C: I cracked up so much at the robe thing, it was a stroke of pure genius on your part. I wonder if that happened to any other captains/lieutenants (badges) before, like Kisuke and Yoruichi? Anyway, it was awesome. I might incorporate something similar into one of my fics, if you don't mind. ;PP One thing tho, I'm not sure you ever answered why Retsu wears her hair like that, or maybe I missed it. Care to clarify? Awesome job!

~larkie

i loved it! *bows and applauds*

I love this story. It has excellent humor and well written romance. There are lines in this story that I've fallen in love with.

"Zaraki’s day started off with the morning yells of his little pink blob named Yachiru.She would usually wake up from such nightmares as red and purple poisonous candies or Byakushi-nii trying to eat her for dinner." *snigger*

"He quickly, removed his captain’s robe and slipped his arms out of his hakama to reveal scars, rips and a 6 pack that could be mistaken as a washing board." *drool*

Very cute! I loved it! This is one of the few crack pairings that I actually like! Good job!

Hot stuff. five star kid.

Wow, hectic story XD Really really REALLY liked it! barely any errors and the storyline was really original. keep it up kid,

Pure Awesome, though you're timeline seems a bit screwy, if not don't spoil it for me. I'm not up to date on Bleach, not by a long way.

That was really creative and cute! I loved it haha, keep it up
The couple was really interesting


-fanatic

Lovely story. Points for Ken/Uno pairing.

good job.

Now that was pretty good
Very nice, um love scene? coulda been more action. ya know actioon =P

So very cute. So very sweet. I love this pairing.

You did an excellent job. Keep up the good work.