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| Gilari 2008-08-30 ch 14,  | abuseE!! Oh. My. Goodness. This makes me so happy. I have been wanting to write a story exactly like this for the longest time. Of course, my version goes in a different direction, but I liked yours a lot. It is so perfect for what could have happened. Dispite being dead for a long time, Sha're is my favorite character, and I love how she and Daniel get their happy ending in this story. Can't wait to read the sequel! |
| kissmekent 2008-08-05 ch 14, | abuseGreat story, I look forward to the sequel, perhaps little Catherine starting Kindergarden, that'd be interesting! |
| Jassmine de Blanc 2008-08-05 ch 14, | abuseOh, this was adorable! Do you know that feeling, when you're just warm and fuzzy inside and want to hug somebody? Well, that's exactly how this chapter made me feel! I absolutely LOVED it! :) Thank you for a great fic - I'll be looking forward to the sequel! :) |
| Jassmine de Blanc 2008-08-05 ch 13, | abuseThis was absolutely lovely! The moments between Sha're and Shifu were ver touching and realistically written, and Daniel worrying for him unconscious wife was simply adorable! A great chapter, and a very nice way to handle the Shifu problem! And of course, *YAY!!* for the ner baby! :) |
| LE McMurray 2008-08-05 ch 14, | abuseVery sweet. Loved the ending - how it should have happened. L.E |
| nana lee 2008-08-05 ch 14, | abuseVery sweet ending, happy ending thanks |
| Beth - Formerly Ya Betcha 2008-08-05 ch 14, | abuseGreat! :) Absolutely loved it. |
| techtchr 2008-08-04 ch 13, | abuseI've really enjoyed the story so far. You've done a great job with the characters and emotions -- so believable! I'm a bit sad to learn that only one chapter is left, but I'm looking forward to it. Thanks! |
| Beth - Formerly Ya Betcha 2008-08-04 ch 13, | abuseGreat! Read and review mine please? It's titled Music Lovers, One and All and the first two chapters are already up. |
| nana lee 2008-08-04 ch 13, | abuseNicely done, No need for "Absolute Power" episode all done. And she is pregnate, thats great. but sad this only has 1 more chapter it has been a good story Thanks |
| LE McMurray 2008-08-04 ch 13, | abuseAll I can say is aw |
| Jassmine de Blanc 2008-08-03 ch 12, | abuseOh, my... what a cliffhanger! I do hope Sha're is in no great danger... Maybe the reactivation of her memories affected her? Hm... I can't wait to read more! AS for Shifu, I agree Daniel made the right decision - hopefully Sha're will get to see her child someday, though... |
| Jassmine de Blanc 2008-08-03 ch 11, | abuseI knew it wouldn't be easy for the two of them, and I love the way you handle the more difficult things in their life... I hope they'll come to the best solution concerning Shifu, when they eventually find him! |
| Jassmine de Blanc 2008-08-03 ch 10, | abuseIt's going to be a long talk... But with the best aftermath, I hope! :) I love your story - it's realistically written and the dinamics between Daniel and Sha're is great! |
| Jassmine de Blanc 2008-08-03 ch 9, | abuseWonderful! Excelently written, and so beautiful! I loved the chapter, it was so sweet and romantic! Also great Skaara and Kasuf little moments! |